Monday, November 14, 2011

Alicia's Group Block 1 Cyberbullying Rough Draft

15 comments:

Cristabel's teledramatic Art Reflections said...

the beging started off seriouse so i already knew what to expect and what kind of feel i would be expecting from the video what i didnt excpect was how much of an impact i would get from the video . i felt the messege to be very effective and the tone of the girl at the end was a genuin care and it felt very nice just listening to what she was warning us about cyberbullying .

Estefanias teledramic art reflection said...

what we liked about your video was how you used the high school scene and your voice tone throughout the video. the music really fit well with it as well. this was effective because it really caught our attention and had really good examples about what could happen if we cyberbullied others. the final thought of the summantion was that it imapcted us in many ways. there is an open title and it grabs our attention. we think once you complete the video it will be great and cant wait to see it finished.
Alyssa& Estefania.

michael rodriguez said...

michael and maria,
we really liked your video because it had a nice, slow flow to it. It also showed a good message. The music went really goodwith the whole video. We also liked the part when you guys talked about the different types of cyberbullying. We loved how the begining started becasue you really grabbed the audiences attention with all the different types of interviews. In conclusion we loved the video because you got the main points across.

Denise Torres said...

Lizzy and Denise.
What we liked most about your video was that the messege was very clear and the voice over was well done and went with the music. The opening scene was well executed and well introduced with the interviews on what cyberbullying is. The main points made were the 5 types of cyberbullying and how much it can hurt a person. The points were made in a good logical order and you did a good job , it flowed well. The narration had a good tone and was very clear, the audience was looking at highschool students on a normal day which helped get the point across. The final thought could include who to go to for help.
P.S
A&S lizzy loves you too

Cassandra De La Cerda said...

What we liked best about your video was the tone and message that was put out and the way it was put out. Everything was cohesive and stayed true to the way you wanted to present your information. We thought this was effective because it kept our attention, we heard the message very clearly, and a lot of information was given.



What we liked best about your video was the tone and message that was put out and the way it was put out. Everything was cohesive and stayed true to the way you wanted to present your information. We thought this was effective because it kept our attention, we heard the message very clearly, and a lot of information was given.

The opening scene does hook the viewr. When the music that was set with the slide it went very well and instantly told us that it was a serious issue.

That cyberbullying can hurt people where you know of it or not. And also whether you mean it as a joke or seriously.

Everything could be heard, the socail backgrounds showed the socail aspect of a teenager and thier daily life.
The sound was really good. The voice over could be heard clearly. The interviews were heard clearly and the music went very well with the video.


The opening scene does hook the viewr. When the music that was set with the slide it went very well and instantly told us that it was a serious issue.

That cyberbullying can hurt people where you know of it or not. And also whether you mean it as a joke or seriously.

Everything could be heard, the socail backgrounds showed the socail aspect of a teenager and thier daily life.
The sound was really good. The voice over could be heard clearly. The interviews were heard clearly and the music went very well with the video.

Anonymous said...

What we liked about your video were the descriptions of cyberbulling and the dufferent types of bullies. The opening scene was good because of the student interviews you guys added to your video. The tone made us really think about what the video was actually about. All the music in your video made us reflect about how cyberbulling really afects people inside and out. The main point about cyberbulling that was made was that there are many more consequences than people think. The music made the video feel serious. All in all, it wasa well structured video. Good job!!

Zachary Andrade and Kayla Dawe

Jorge said...

What we liked about your video was how it flowed. the interviews in the highschool scence was affective because we could realte. the music really caught the viewers attention during the opening scene. maybe the titles could of been a little less glomy the main points that were made were that cyberbullying is very serious. while the narriation was going on you can see alot of graphics wich catch the viewers attention. the music sence was picked out very good/smooth. we did not get to see a summation because it was not finished, therefore we were not able to see your credits but titles were formative. good and interesting video overall.
Elissa Abonce & Jorge CHavez

Julichelle said...

What we liked best about your video was the seguence and flow that remained serious and informative. We thought this was effective beause you set the tone to be very serious and no joking matter. The opening scene grabbed our attention with the big title and sad music. The main point about cyberbullying was the 5 different types of bullies and that it can hurt someone just as bad as getting in a car accident. The narroration caught our attention because it showed pictures and played music to show the effects of cyberbullying. The sound and music dramitically helped the video because we could tell that there was an important message being given off. Our final thought was that the whole video was in perfect order and really grabbed all of the viewer's attention because it wasn't too long and it got to the point! The video was successful and very professionally put together.
-Julissa & Michelle

Tyler Holland said...

What we liked best about your video was the tone and message that was put out and the way it was put out. Everything was cohesive and stayed true to the way you wanted to present your information. We thought this was effective because it kept our attention, we heard the message very clearly, and a lot of information was given.

The opening scene does hook the viewr. When the music that was set with the slide it went very well and instantly told us that it was a serious issue.

That cyberbullying can hurt people where you know of it or not. And also whether you mean it as a joke or seriously.

Everything could be heard, the socail backgrounds showed the socail aspect of a teenager and thier daily life.
The sound was really good. The voice over could be heard clearly. The interviews were heard clearly and the music went very well with the video.

Hayley said...

What we liked best about the video was that Sam sounded touching in the way that explained everything and the sequence of the video. We thought this was effective because it did help relate to the video and it helped us to take it seriously. The openy scene was done well, we liked that it was done slowly and faded out at the end, it made it seem sad. The main point in this video is that cyberbullying is serious and should be taken seriously. This video shows the effects of cyberbullying and explained the different types of it. The points are in the best logical order. In the background we liked that they showed actual people hanging out at school. This gave it a more realistic view. The pictures that they chose were really good. They made us think of what could really happen and how it effects all of us. The music corresponded well with the video and the mood. They really did make a difference. We liked it the way it was. Just finish it. We loved the titles, they caught our attention.
Laura and Hayley

Cynthia said...

What we liked best about your video was the entire thing. For example the transition from scene to scene and the voice over. It really caught our attention and made everything look clean:). We thought this was effective because it gave a professional feel to the video and kids took it more seriously. The opening scene was good really good becuase of the music that was the right tone and the transition from the different facts from the different phrases. The main point about cyberbullying being a very bad issue and the different consequences made us feel like it was a matter that is very much real in everyday life. The narration was very clear and the right tone for the video. The addition of the music throughout the entire video was very helpful for the mood and tone so that we can know how to react to it. Although it was not finished, the final thought that we got from it was that cyberbullying is a serious issue just as big as anything else. Some suggestion for the final video is have more people talking about sexting instead of the same question. Kind of make more of a variety of questions.

Sincerely,
Cynthia N. & Kelsey R.

Jaay Christina said...

What we liked about your video was the pictures and the music playing in the background. The opening scene helped grab people's attention with the music, also Sam's voice helped. The main points being told were that cyberbullying is bad and can hurt people. During Sam's narration, we could see different pictures that showed emotion. The music was serious and went along perfectly with the tone of the video. The final thought was the most important message because it told the viewer the dangers of cyberbullying and what could happen to someone ewho is being cyberbullied. The titles could have been a little more creative with their appearance.
A different color or effect would've helped make them more eye catching.

-Cristian & Jaay

Cody Cameron said...

Demi&Cody

Opening scene was very well done, we really liked how your had different interviews from students of this school and their prospective of what cyberbullying is. It helps us relate more to the video. We believe that the message was cleary recieved, esspecially when your group defined the fives different types of bullies, and gave exaples of them. Then we really liked the steps to take if you are being cyberbullied. The sound was well pull together the soft music complimented Sams soft voice. Making the video have a serious yet soft tone. The conclusion was great bring everything together. The suggestions we would have is to maybe cut one interview from the begining. Over all it was a great video.

Jessica Hernandez said...

What we liked best about your video was the clarity of the facts presented, and the serious mood you presented.
This was effective with the calmness of you voice, the sad music, and the pictures that went right along with what you were expressing.
The opening scene really grabbed our attention because of your clear yeet serious voice.
The main points made were how dangerous cyberbullying really is, and how it can affect teens.
I think you emphasized all your points really well. Your order was in a good logical order too.
During the naration of your video, when you are presenting facts, pictures are shown, which went along really well with your points. When you were interviewing people, the audience was viewing the face of the speaker.
We would say your images were really attention-grabbing, and the high school-scene was very realistic and something we all can relate to.
Your music was really effective. The sad, slow music went along really well with the point you made across. We would recommend you keep your music just the way it is.
We thought that your message was brought across quite strongly. You gave some good thought-provoking facts that really supported what your were emphasizing about cyberbullying. (how dangerous it is)
We already know that you will finish your credits and bibliography, and all in all, we really liked your video ! :) Great job!
-Alexis and jessica

Bree and Cesar said...

What we liked best about your video was the flowiness of your music and voiceovers to portray cyberbullying with a morbid tone. The opening scene of Ian was good, but the opening titles ran for a bit too long (The Truth About Cyberbullying and Do You Know...?). At the beginning, you could add something like social networking footage, or texting footage because the black screen is sort of blank and empty. The main points being made about cyberbullying are the five types of cyberbullying and the effects it has on people that are more drastic then we think. You emphasized all the ideas strongly, and everything was in the best logical order. The narration is extremely clear, and loud enough to hear from the back of the classroom, when Sam's voiceover was running, we viewed pictures and footage of high school teenagers interacting. The music was definitely a factor of success in this video; it set the mood perfectly of sadness. In the syudent interviews, maybe making their settings more diverse would show a more diverse school. Also, add the 5 types of cyberbullying to the title instead of simply saying them.