Taylor L and Skyler Job well done guys! We liked the way you would cut out of a person's interview and showed a different shot while they were still talking, this helped us pay attention as the interviews dragged on. On thing that you might need to improve on is to shorten your interviews becuase a few of them dragged on. We enjoyed the music that you had throughtout the video, it seemed to fit the subject pretty well. However, some parts of the video were playing the music too loud. You might want to go back and lower that music. Overall, good job boys :)
What we liked about your video was that you added clips when teachers were talking.The interviews were long and that helped.What you could've done better was to add titles before the interviews.We think that you have just enough interviews.The music was also good but you could lower it when the teacher's are talking.We also think that the message was clear but you could've said what cyberbulling is at the beggining.
What we liked best about your video was the music when you guys cut away to diffrent people and the music chandeg alog with the mood. We thought this was effective because it changed the mood of the video and the audience's attention. The message was good because you guys were just getting teachers and students opinions about it.
Cesar's group, What we liked best about your video all the interviews you had. We thought it was effective because it showed alot of peoples point of view on this. The music was a good choice but the level of the music could go down a bit while people talk. The camera movements could also be a little smoother as well. Dont let the interviews drag on for so long. Overall it was a good video
What we liked best about this video was how effective it was on providing information on cyberbullying. We thought the interviews gave great information but they kind of dragged on a bit and lost our interest quite fast. The music really set the mood at the beginning but then it started to ge really upbeat and that was odd. The audio levels towards the end sort of drowned out the people speaking. One thing that could have been improved was the levelness and the movement of the camera. It was all over the place. It was zooming in and out at the most awkward times. But over all, we really enjoyed your video.
What we liked best about your video was the diffrent clips in the interviews, with schalhorns clip it cut away to a football practice. We though this was effective because it kept our attention. The opening scene was a little slow but the vieo progressed after that, we would have cut some of the clips so it didnt drag on. The sound in the video changed alot,Some of them werent relevant to what was going on in the vide i.e. Mr.Velas , maybe something softer. Michaela Connor Ximena Torres Ashley Perez
What we liked best about the video was the transitions between Sra.Lemos's interview and Schallhorn's interview. We thought this was effective because it prevented the interviews from draggin on too long. We think it would benefit the video if the first two interviews are cut out- leaving Sr.Lemos's interview as the opening scene. This would heighten the overall message of the video, and would provide a smoother flow. The music during Schallhorn's video was too loud, and the interview itself should be cut shorted. We were also concerned with the color transitions during Mr.Vela's interview, and provided that the music being played during Mr.Vela's interview sounded somewhat like an ending, "What should I do To Prevent the Problem" tone,it should either be at the end or should have different music. -Ivy and Brad
What we liked about this video was the amount of different opinions in it. The ending was also funny. Also the music didn't distract from what the interviewee's were saying. Although it was still a little difficult to hear what they were saying. We suggest turning up the volume on what the interviewers were saying, and also putting in a transition would be nice. Your titles were good they were very eyecatching. I know that you guys got some good information but it was a little confusing when mr vela was talking and then we saw the cross country runners running(im not sure what that had to do with your film). I was surprised when i saw my brother in the video, but i like that. The overall message was kind of confusing, maybe titles would help introduce the topics the interviews are talking about. -Zoie &Kenzie
What I liked best about your video was that it kept my attention with the music. I liked how in the beginning the sad music matched up with what the people were talking about. The message that you were trying to convey was clear. One suggestion I have for the audio is that even though the music was good, during Mr. Vela's interview, the specific song you chose was a bit distracting. Also, some of the clips of people out on the football feild felt somewhat out of place. Overall, good job -Kaycee
What we liked best about your video was the music. We found it effective in the fact that it not only kept our attention, but it also fit well with clips, it made the clips more dramatic and inspiring. We felt your message did well in pointing out the fact that cyberbullying is a negative thing for teenagers. We noticed that the video also points out what school's try to do about cyberbullying, and tries to pin-point a reason for it. We would suggest that during your interviews, you should turn down the audio because we were focusing more on the music and not the point. Also, during Mr.Vela's interview, we feel you should change the lighting to normal, because we found it distracting. In your credits, you should list the people in your video. Also, while a humorous scene, we felt Bree's clip was unfitting to the overall video. All in all, your video was a job well done. -Ashley T. and Juan A.
What we liked about your video was the way you transitioned Mr. Vela's interview into the student's interview with the change in music. We thought this was effective because in the beggining it set a somber mood with Mr. Vela's interview then it transitioned to the student's opinion with an upbeat music which set a hopeful mood. We got lost when it transitioned to the football field and quad during the interviews. We didnt understand what message you were trying to portray. You could try showing a clip or a title or even a picture of what the person being interviewed was trying to address. -John and Eduardo B.
What we liked best about your video was how it had some very good interviews like Mr. Vela's. He gave a lot of detail on what the consequences were of being a cyberbully. The opening scene could of been more appealing and exciting to get the viewers attention. You could have made your own title screen instead of going straight into interviews. The music was a bit too loud we heard the music instead of the person being interviewed you can lower the music and maybe you showed find a better song to fit Schallhorns interview. Love always, Taylor P and Sabrena
What we liked best about your video was have the beginning started off smoothly with the background music, it really set the mood. Also the ending broke the ice, you edited Bree Casas fantastically. We thought was effective because it made the video funny. Some things you should fix is when the interviews come in it drags for a liitle to long and the color contrast is kind of distracting, instead of drawing the attention to what Mr.Vela is saying i got distracted by the contrast from going to light to yellow, make it to one contrast. Overall your video was really good and set the point well. By Michelle Hernandez and Blanca Ceja
What we liked about your video was when all the people continuously were saying how facebook was the main source for cyberbullying. We also liiked how the titles were cyber oriented.You guys should have put more music during transitions because it got a little boring and plain. The backround during your interviews was rather noisy. Maybe next time you can try and quiet the people in the backround or go to a secluded area. What we got out of this video is that facebook is where all the problems start for cyberbullying and people should be more careful about who they let view their site. Sincercly, Taylor Powell and Sabrena Soto
14 comments:
Taylor L and Skyler
Job well done guys! We liked the way you would cut out of a person's interview and showed a different shot while they were still talking, this helped us pay attention as the interviews dragged on. On thing that you might need to improve on is to shorten your interviews becuase a few of them dragged on. We enjoyed the music that you had throughtout the video, it seemed to fit the subject pretty well. However, some parts of the video were playing the music too loud. You might want to go back and lower that music. Overall, good job boys :)
What we liked about your video was that you added clips when teachers were talking.The interviews were long and that helped.What you could've done better was to add titles before the interviews.We think that you have just enough interviews.The music was also good but you could lower it when the teacher's are talking.We also think that the message was clear but you could've said what cyberbulling is at the beggining.
Joselyn and Chris
What we liked best about your video was the music when you guys cut away to diffrent people and the music chandeg alog with the mood. We thought this was effective because it changed the mood of the video and the audience's attention. The message was good because you guys were just getting teachers and students opinions about it.
Jake & Krystain
Cesar's group,
What we liked best about your video all the interviews you had. We thought it was effective because it showed alot of peoples point of view on this. The music was a good choice but the level of the music could go down a bit while people talk. The camera movements could also be a little smoother as well. Dont let the interviews drag on for so long. Overall it was a good video
What we liked best about this video was how effective it was on providing information on cyberbullying. We thought the interviews gave great information but they kind of dragged on a bit and lost our interest quite fast. The music really set the mood at the beginning but then it started to ge really upbeat and that was odd. The audio levels towards the end sort of drowned out the people speaking. One thing that could have been improved was the levelness and the movement of the camera. It was all over the place. It was zooming in and out at the most awkward times. But over all, we really enjoyed your video.
<3 Dillon & Marleen.
What we liked best about your video was the diffrent clips in the interviews, with schalhorns clip it cut away to a football practice. We though this was effective because it kept our attention. The opening scene was a little slow but the vieo progressed after that, we would have cut some of the clips so it didnt drag on. The sound in the video changed alot,Some of them werent relevant to what was going on in the vide i.e. Mr.Velas , maybe something softer.
Michaela Connor
Ximena Torres
Ashley Perez
What we liked best about the video was the transitions between Sra.Lemos's interview and Schallhorn's interview. We thought this was effective because it prevented the interviews from draggin on too long. We think it would benefit the video if the first two interviews are cut out- leaving Sr.Lemos's interview as the opening scene. This would heighten the overall message of the video, and would provide a smoother flow. The music during Schallhorn's video was too loud, and the interview itself should be cut shorted. We were also concerned with the color transitions during Mr.Vela's interview, and provided that the music being played during Mr.Vela's interview sounded somewhat like an ending, "What should I do To Prevent the Problem" tone,it should either be at the end or should have different music. -Ivy and Brad
What we liked about this video was the amount of different opinions in it. The ending was also funny. Also the music didn't distract from what the interviewee's were saying. Although it was still a little difficult to hear what they were saying. We suggest turning up the volume on what the interviewers were saying, and also putting in a transition would be nice. Your titles were good they were very eyecatching. I know that you guys got some good information but it was a little confusing when mr vela was talking and then we saw the cross country runners running(im not sure what that had to do with your film). I was surprised when i saw my brother in the video, but i like that. The overall message was kind of confusing, maybe titles would help introduce the topics the interviews are talking about.
-Zoie &Kenzie
What I liked best about your video was that it kept my attention with the music. I liked how in the beginning the sad music matched up with what the people were talking about. The message that you were trying to convey was clear. One suggestion I have for the audio is that even though the music was good, during Mr. Vela's interview, the specific song you chose was a bit distracting. Also, some of the clips of people out on the football feild felt somewhat out of place. Overall, good job
-Kaycee
What we liked best about your video was the music. We found it effective in the fact that it not only kept our attention, but it also fit well with clips, it made the clips more dramatic and inspiring. We felt your message did well in pointing out the fact that cyberbullying is a negative thing for teenagers. We noticed that the video also points out what school's try to do about cyberbullying, and tries to pin-point a reason for it. We would suggest that during your interviews, you should turn down the audio because we were focusing more on the music and not the point. Also, during Mr.Vela's interview, we feel you should change the lighting to normal, because we found it distracting. In your credits, you should list the people in your video. Also, while a humorous scene, we felt Bree's clip was unfitting to the overall video. All in all, your video was a job well done.
-Ashley T. and Juan A.
What we liked about your video was the way you transitioned Mr. Vela's interview into the student's interview with the change in music. We thought this was effective because in the beggining it set a somber mood with Mr. Vela's interview then it transitioned to the student's opinion with an upbeat music which set a hopeful mood. We got lost when it transitioned to the football field and quad during the interviews. We didnt understand what message you were trying to portray. You could try showing a clip or a title or even a picture of what the person being interviewed was trying to address.
-John and Eduardo B.
What we liked best about your video was how it had some very good interviews like Mr. Vela's.
He gave a lot of detail on what the consequences were of being a cyberbully. The opening scene could of been more appealing and exciting to get the viewers attention. You could have made your own title screen instead of going straight into interviews. The music was a bit too loud we heard the music instead of the person being interviewed you can lower the music and maybe you showed find a better song to fit Schallhorns interview. Love always, Taylor P and Sabrena
What we liked best about your video was have the beginning started off smoothly with the background music, it really set the mood. Also the ending broke the ice, you edited Bree Casas fantastically. We thought was effective because it made the video funny. Some things you should fix is when the interviews come in it drags for a liitle to long and the color contrast is kind of distracting, instead of drawing the attention to what Mr.Vela is saying i got distracted by the contrast from going to light to yellow, make it to one contrast. Overall your video was really good and set the point well.
By Michelle Hernandez and Blanca Ceja
What we liked about your video was when all the people continuously were saying how facebook was the main source for cyberbullying. We also liiked how the titles were cyber oriented.You guys should have put more music during transitions because it got a little boring and plain. The backround during your interviews was rather noisy. Maybe next time you can try and quiet the people in the backround or go to a secluded area. What we got out of this video is that facebook is where all the problems start for cyberbullying and people should be more careful about who they let view their site.
Sincercly,
Taylor Powell and Sabrena Soto
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