michael and maria, in your video we both liked that you had information to get help. we really liked the music because it went well with the clips. Also we both thought the video should of been longer with more interviews. Besides that it was really good and i liked how it honored the people who died of this serious issue.
What we liked best about this video is that they got their message acrossed. Specifically they honored the ones who lost their lives from cyberbyulling. We thought this was effective because it brought a serious but understanding tone to the video. the openening scene set the tempo throughout the video. The story and message was started by this good openeing scene and was clear throughout the video. We believe you could have put a little more music in your video. The conclusion was good but the credits were qa little fast. All in all this was a good video.
I think that the opening scene was a little too quick but if you slow it down a little it should be fine. I really think that the message was coveyed rather accuaretely and i feel it "really hit home" because i was able to feel what you were trying to express. The order seemed logical and at times i got lost but it was justified by the tone. In the beginning the sound started off really loud but if you were able to tone it down a little and smooth the music it would be great. I loved the conclusion because it added to the sadness of it and it provided information on where to go if you have ever been cyberbullyied. The credits could have been a little creative but it was good, we were able to tellt that you had a lot of sources which adds to the credibility of your video. Maybe slowing down the pace and making it flow smoother but overall it was a really nice video.
What we liked about your video is how you had the number to call if your being bullied. the opening was alright but it really didnt hook us.you could add a few more pictures and maybe let it flow better.the main points on this video was ways to contact people if your beeing bullied. well one interview you can tell they are watching you.to import more pictures you can go to google and get them and maybe you should interview a few more people.when they put the number and it increased the music sound and it was good.the final thought may need a little more work and once that is changed we think it will be great video!yes a opening title. It sort of caught our attention. yes everybody is identified in the video. bib. is good. it just needs to have more things a flow more better. -Alyssa & Estefania.
What we liked best about your video was the message of Honoring those who have taken thier lives because of cyberbulling. We thought this was effective becuase it hit an emotional nerve.
The opening scene is a good start we feel like there should be something more. But we don't know what that is.
The main point is to NOT cyberbully because of the cause and effect scenarious that can occur. Personally we think they need more one those who have taken thier lives.
We feel like the narration of the group was fine, the interviews--we were focusing on the adults ebing interviewed, but it does look a little off with the editing. We think the titles should be different they don't go well with the video. We think you should go back and re-edit clips and fix the titles and make the flow a lot better. Add more information too.
The music was edited oddly and was a good idea just go back and fix the chop.
What you have now has potentioal, it just needs more revising and just more. Emphasize ur message more.
The opening title is very attention grabbing. There needs to be a little bit of veriaty in the titles where it is in the size of text or the font color or setting. It seems like it needs more. Also slow down the end credits.
What we like best about your video was the remembering of the victims who have died, due to depression from cyberbullying. We thought this was affective because it containded a lot of emotion, and the message was conveyed well. The oepning scene was good, it really captured our attention with all the different scences shown. We really would not change anything at the begining. The main points being made about cyberbullying were the affects of cyberbullying, and what to do if you see cyberbullying. The ideas were ephasized greatly, and were in a good logical order. When the people were being interviewed in your video, the audience was viewing the person talking. The music and animation was good too. The music was definately great. The songs chosen were full of emotion. The conclusion was great. We liked that you put who the video was dedicated to, and where to go if you are being cyberbullied. It was very creative. The opening title was pretty good, maybe you could have added a bit more color? But we liked it. The bibliography looked like it was all done correctly. Great job! We really liked your video :) -Alexis and Jessica
What we like best about your video was the remembering of the victims who have died, due to depression from cyberbullying. We thought this was affective because it containded a lot of emotion, and the message was conveyed well. The oepning scene was good, it really captured our attention with all the different scences shown. We really would not change anything at the begining. The main points being made about cyberbullying were the affects of cyberbullying, and what to do if you see cyberbullying. The ideas were ephasized greatly, and were in a good logical order. When the people were being interviewed in your video, the audience was viewing the person talking. The music and animation was good too. The music was definately great. The songs chosen were full of emotion. The conclusion was great. We liked that you put who the video was dedicated to, and where to go if you are being cyberbullied. It was very creative. The opening title was pretty good, maybe you could have added a bit more color? But we liked it. The bibliography looked like it was all done correctly. Great job! We really liked your video :) -Alexis and Jessica
What we liked best about your video is how it was more focused on honoring the victims of cyberbullying. We thought this was effective because personally we had no idea how long the list actually was.i think the opening scene was more about sexting than cyberbullying. The main points of the video were the effects of cyberbullying. The audience was looking at a lot of clips while the person was narrating. i think you should make your clips a lot longer, it was too fast and we could not read the clips. The music fit well for the list, but other than that the music was unecessary.We think you should focus either on cyberbullying or sexting. You opened up with sexting but said nothing about it. The title did not grab our attention. Experts were identified. Yeah so you should make your clips longer and focus on your topics Love: Sam and Alicia
What we liked best about the video was the honoring of the victims of cyberbullying and how the information for what to do in case of being cyberbullied was well emphasized. The opening scene could have been edited better; most scenes were random and did not make sence. I think the messages of the effects of cyberbullying and how to get help are very well emphasized, but there could have been more information on what causes to cyberbully and what cyberbullying is. The sound was well edited. The video needs work but it was a good effort. The credits need work because it was really fast. Very touching video. -Luis & Vanessa
What we liked best about this video was how they honored/remembered the victims of cyberbullying and made a point that cyberbullying really does happen and so many deaths really occur. We thought this was effective because it makes us realize how important and real this siuation can be. The opening scene would catch the younger audience's attention. It could be a little stronger with different type of music and maybe a setting where it shows someone being cyberbullied more. The main points are many deaths happen then what we know and it also gives the audience resources who to contact and how to handle it. We think there should be more facts and different view points more around the younger crowd so that we can connect and realize how serious this issue is. When there is an interview, we are looking at the person getting interviwed. Some suggestions is maybe on the facts being shown on the video, they can have a narrator or someone saying some facts during a scene instead of just music. The final thought isn't as strong of a summation as it could be. Maybe next time there could be more of a conclusion where someone is speaking and raping everything up.
What we liked best about your video was the information about getting help if you need it. We thought this video was effective because it showed proof that people hurt themselves because of cyberbullying by naming people that have committed suicide. The opening scene showed that cyberbullying happens at any time and any place. The main points about cyberbullying was suicide and how sad is and it is not something that should be taken lightly. We suggest that you should show examples on how you prevent cyberbullying. The music emphasized the mood that was trying to be set. The music hinted sadness and touched the heart because it made you think about how bad it is. The important message that we picked up was that suicides happen from cyberbullying. We think there should have been more information on what cyberbullying. It was a good video but there were some minor flaws that should be given more attention such as, the ending credits(slow them down), the music at the end(there was none), and the information given(more information). Overall, it was a great video and there was good effort put in to it. -Julissa & Michelle
what we liked about your video was that you gave in formation about where people can go if they get cyberbullied. We thought this video was effective because of the information was presented with specific examples, like going to a counselor or teacher for help. The opening scene of a text message didn't flow too well. It was slighty awkward, maybe you should include student interviews to begin it. The main points were who to ask for help if you are a victim of cyberbullying. An idea you should discuss more is what cyberbullying is; you talk a lot about prevention but not what it is. The beginning was a little confusing and the clips rolled pretty fast. There was no narration and it was difficult to stay focused on the video. You should add more color and music. Your music did not fit your video. The vibe made me think of happiness, I think a piano slow song that is sad would be better. The beginnig of the video should have some agressive music if you show a mean text message, and the creedits were very long, so maybe add some fun music there. This video talks more about prevention, but not explain what Cyberbullying is. Maybe you should explain it better.
What we liked best about your video was the tip lines provided for help and the names listed to honour the people who took their lives. this was effective because it added a sense of emotion. I think the opening scene couldve been stronger by adding more color. The main point that was made is that cyberbullying happens frequently and that sometimes it can affect people in the worst possible way.During the interview provided the audience is provided with text and during narration there was audio. The addition of sound really helped catch emotion. The final thought was not reslly a summation of the important points; a tip line was offered for victims. I think the effects and more tips on prevention should have been emphasized. The opening title could have been better by adding brighter colors. The experts and students in the video were identifird. Bibliography and credits were well done. Elissa Abonce& Jorge Chavez
What we liked best about your video was how you honored those who were seriously effected by cyberbullying. The opening scene was a little too quick, maybe slow it down a bit. Some main points were that there are people out there who can help victims of cyberbullying. Ideas that need to be more emphasized on are how much it can hurt a victim and consequences of cyberbullying. Maybe add more variety to the information you have. The text about who were victyims was very touching and we think you used the right kind of text. There was a part were the music ended kind of abruptly, maybe lower the music would make it flow more.The conclusion caught the audiences' attention and made them realize how serious cyberbullying is. Possible add more footage choices to the video. We feel that the title and the video didn't really fit eachother. Liz Quezada and Denise Torres
What we liked about the video was the pictures they included. The opening was a little boring, and the main points about this videos were the facts they gave about cyberbulluying. This video doesnt really hook people's attention. There is no interviews in this video. Our advice to you would be to include interviews in your video.Yes there is and opening title and everyone is mentioned. We think the music didnt affect anything because you guys were just talking all the time. The final thought was really important because you guys had many facts in your video but overall we still think you need to include interviews to make your video more interesting. - Alyssa & Estefania
What we liked best about your video was the message of Honoring those who have taken thier lives because of cyberbulling. We thought this was effective becuase it hit an emotional nerve.
The opening scene is a good start we feel like there should be something more. But we don't know what that is.
The main point is to NOT cyberbully because of the cause and effect scenarious that can occur. Personally we think they need more one those who have taken thier lives.
We feel like the narration of the group was fine, the interviews--we were focusing on the adults ebing interviewed, but it does look a little off with the editing. We think the titles should be different they don't go well with the video. We think you should go back and re-edit clips and fix the titles and make the flow a lot better. Add more information too.
The music was edited oddly and was a good idea just go back and fix the chop.
What you have now has potentioal, it just needs more revising and just more. Emphasize ur message more.
The opening title is very attention grabbing. There needs to be a little bit of veriaty in the titles where it is in the size of text or the font color or setting. It seems like it needs more. Also slow down the end credits.
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michael and maria, in your video we both liked that you had information to get help. we really liked the music because it went well with the clips. Also we both thought the video should of been longer with more interviews. Besides that it was really good and i liked how it honored the people who died of this serious issue.
Demi and Cody
What we liked best about this video is that they got their message acrossed. Specifically they honored the ones who lost their lives from cyberbyulling. We thought this was effective because it brought a serious but understanding tone to the video. the openening scene set the tempo throughout the video. The story and message was started by this good openeing scene and was clear throughout the video. We believe you could have put a little more music in your video. The conclusion was good but the credits were qa little fast. All in all this was a good video.
I think that the opening scene was a little too quick but if you slow it down a little it should be fine.
I really think that the message was coveyed rather accuaretely and i feel it "really hit home" because i was able to feel what you were trying to express. The order seemed logical and at times i got lost but it was justified by the tone. In the beginning the sound started off really loud but if you were able to tone it down a little and smooth the music it would be great. I loved the conclusion because it added to the sadness of it and it provided information on where to go if you have ever been cyberbullyied. The credits could have been a little creative but it was good, we were able to tellt that you had a lot of sources which adds to the credibility of your video. Maybe slowing down the pace and making it flow smoother but overall it was a really nice video.
Eddy Navarro and Lizzy Frasca
What we liked about your video is how you had the number to call if your being bullied. the opening was alright but it really didnt hook us.you could add a few more pictures and maybe let it flow better.the main points on this video was ways to contact people if your beeing bullied. well one interview you can tell they are watching you.to import more pictures you can go to google and get them and maybe you should interview a few more people.when they put the number and it increased the music sound and it was good.the final thought may need a little more work and once that is changed we think it will be great video!yes a opening title. It sort of caught our attention. yes everybody is identified in the video. bib. is good. it just needs to have more things a flow more better.
-Alyssa & Estefania.
What we liked best about your video was the message of Honoring those who have taken thier lives because of cyberbulling. We thought this was effective becuase it hit an emotional nerve.
The opening scene is a good start we feel like there should be something more. But we don't know what that is.
The main point is to NOT cyberbully because of the cause and effect scenarious that can occur. Personally we think they need more one those who have taken thier lives.
We feel like the narration of the group was fine, the interviews--we were focusing on the adults ebing interviewed, but it does look a little off with the editing. We think the titles should be different they don't go well with the video. We think you should go back and re-edit clips and fix the titles and make the flow a lot better. Add more information too.
The music was edited oddly and was a good idea just go back and fix the chop.
What you have now has potentioal, it just needs more revising and just more. Emphasize ur message more.
The opening title is very attention grabbing. There needs to be a little bit of veriaty in the titles where it is in the size of text or the font color or setting. It seems like it needs more. Also slow down the end credits.
What we like best about your video was the remembering of the victims who have died, due to depression from cyberbullying. We thought this was affective because it containded a lot of emotion, and the message was conveyed well.
The oepning scene was good, it really captured our attention with all the different scences shown.
We really would not change anything at the begining.
The main points being made about cyberbullying were the affects of cyberbullying, and what to do if you see cyberbullying. The ideas were ephasized greatly, and were in a good logical order.
When the people were being interviewed in your video, the audience was viewing the person talking. The music and animation was good too.
The music was definately great. The songs chosen were full of emotion.
The conclusion was great. We liked that you put who the video was dedicated to, and where to go if you are being cyberbullied. It was very creative. The opening title was pretty good, maybe you could have added a bit more color? But we liked it. The bibliography looked like it was all done correctly. Great job! We really liked your video :)
-Alexis and Jessica
What we like best about your video was the remembering of the victims who have died, due to depression from cyberbullying. We thought this was affective because it containded a lot of emotion, and the message was conveyed well.
The oepning scene was good, it really captured our attention with all the different scences shown.
We really would not change anything at the begining.
The main points being made about cyberbullying were the affects of cyberbullying, and what to do if you see cyberbullying. The ideas were ephasized greatly, and were in a good logical order.
When the people were being interviewed in your video, the audience was viewing the person talking. The music and animation was good too.
The music was definately great. The songs chosen were full of emotion.
The conclusion was great. We liked that you put who the video was dedicated to, and where to go if you are being cyberbullied. It was very creative. The opening title was pretty good, maybe you could have added a bit more color? But we liked it. The bibliography looked like it was all done correctly. Great job! We really liked your video :)
-Alexis and Jessica
What we liked best about your video is how it was more focused on honoring the victims of cyberbullying. We thought this was effective because personally we had no idea how long the list actually was.i think the opening scene was more about sexting than cyberbullying. The main points of the video were the effects of cyberbullying. The audience was looking at a lot of clips while the person was narrating. i think you should make your clips a lot longer, it was too fast and we could not read the clips. The music fit well for the list, but other than that the music was unecessary.We think you should focus either on cyberbullying or sexting. You opened up with sexting but said nothing about it. The title did not grab our attention. Experts were identified. Yeah so you should make your clips longer and focus on your topics
Love: Sam and Alicia
What we liked best about the video was the honoring of the victims of cyberbullying and how the information for what to do in case of being cyberbullied was well emphasized. The opening scene could have been edited better; most scenes were random and did not make sence. I think the messages of the effects of cyberbullying and how to get help are very well emphasized, but there could have been more information on what causes to cyberbully and what cyberbullying is. The sound was well edited. The video needs work but it was a good effort. The credits need work because it was really fast. Very touching video.
-Luis & Vanessa
What we liked best about this video was how they honored/remembered the victims of cyberbullying and made a point that cyberbullying really does happen and so many deaths really occur. We thought this was effective because it makes us realize how important and real this siuation can be. The opening scene would catch the younger audience's attention. It could be a little stronger with different type of music and maybe a setting where it shows someone being cyberbullied more. The main points are many deaths happen then what we know and it also gives the audience resources who to contact and how to handle it. We think there should be more facts and different view points more around the younger crowd so that we can connect and realize how serious this issue is. When there is an interview, we are looking at the person getting interviwed. Some suggestions is maybe on the facts being shown on the video, they can have a narrator or someone saying some facts during a scene instead of just music. The final thought isn't as strong of a summation as it could be. Maybe next time there could be more of a conclusion where someone is speaking and raping everything up.
Sincerely,
Kelsey R. & Cynthia N.
What we liked best about your video was the information about getting help if you need it. We thought this video was effective because it showed proof that people hurt themselves because of cyberbullying by naming people that have committed suicide. The opening scene showed that cyberbullying happens at any time and any place. The main points about cyberbullying was suicide and how sad is and it is not something that should be taken lightly. We suggest that you should show examples on how you prevent cyberbullying. The music emphasized the mood that was trying to be set. The music hinted sadness and touched the heart because it made you think about how bad it is. The important message that we picked up was that suicides happen from cyberbullying. We think there should have been more information on what cyberbullying. It was a good video but there were some minor flaws that should be given more attention such as, the ending credits(slow them down), the music at the end(there was none), and the information given(more information). Overall, it was a great video and there was good effort put in to it.
-Julissa & Michelle
what we liked about your video was that you gave in formation about where people can go if they get cyberbullied. We thought this video was effective because of the information was presented with specific examples, like going to a counselor or teacher for help. The opening scene of a text message didn't flow too well. It was slighty awkward, maybe you should include student interviews to begin it. The main points were who to ask for help if you are a victim of cyberbullying. An idea you should discuss more is what cyberbullying is; you talk a lot about prevention but not what it is. The beginning was a little confusing and the clips rolled pretty fast. There was no narration and it was difficult to stay focused on the video. You should add more color and music. Your music did not fit your video. The vibe made me think of happiness, I think a piano slow song that is sad would be better. The beginnig of the video should have some agressive music if you show a mean text message, and the creedits were very long, so maybe add some fun music there. This video talks more about prevention, but not explain what Cyberbullying is. Maybe you should explain it better.
What we liked best about your video was the tip lines provided for help and the names listed to honour the people who took their lives. this was effective because it added a sense of emotion. I think the opening scene couldve been stronger by adding more color. The main point that was made is that cyberbullying happens frequently and that sometimes it can affect people in the worst possible way.During the interview provided the audience is provided with text and during narration there was audio. The addition of sound really helped catch emotion. The final thought was not reslly a summation of the important points; a tip line was offered for victims. I think the effects and more tips on prevention should have been emphasized. The opening title could have been better by adding brighter colors. The experts and students in the video were identifird. Bibliography and credits were well done.
Elissa Abonce& Jorge Chavez
What we liked best about your video was how you honored those who were seriously effected by cyberbullying. The opening scene was a little too quick, maybe slow it down a bit. Some main points were that there are people out there who can help victims of cyberbullying. Ideas that need to be more emphasized on are how much it can hurt a victim and consequences of cyberbullying. Maybe add more variety to the information you have. The text about who were victyims was very touching and we think you used the right kind of text. There was a part were the music ended kind of abruptly, maybe lower the music would make it flow more.The conclusion caught the audiences' attention and made them realize how serious cyberbullying is. Possible add more footage choices to the video. We feel that the title and the video didn't really fit eachother.
Liz Quezada and Denise Torres
What we liked about the video was the pictures they included. The opening was a little boring, and the main points about this videos were the facts they gave about cyberbulluying. This video doesnt really hook people's attention. There is no interviews in this video. Our advice to you would be to include interviews in your video.Yes there is and opening title and everyone is mentioned. We think the music didnt affect anything because you guys were just talking all the time. The final thought was really important because you guys had many facts in your video but overall we still think you need to include interviews to make your video more interesting.
- Alyssa & Estefania
What we liked best about your video was the message of Honoring those who have taken thier lives because of cyberbulling. We thought this was effective becuase it hit an emotional nerve.
The opening scene is a good start we feel like there should be something more. But we don't know what that is.
The main point is to NOT cyberbully because of the cause and effect scenarious that can occur. Personally we think they need more one those who have taken thier lives.
We feel like the narration of the group was fine, the interviews--we were focusing on the adults ebing interviewed, but it does look a little off with the editing. We think the titles should be different they don't go well with the video. We think you should go back and re-edit clips and fix the titles and make the flow a lot better. Add more information too.
The music was edited oddly and was a good idea just go back and fix the chop.
What you have now has potentioal, it just needs more revising and just more. Emphasize ur message more.
The opening title is very attention grabbing. There needs to be a little bit of veriaty in the titles where it is in the size of text or the font color or setting. It seems like it needs more. Also slow down the end credits.
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