Monday, November 14, 2011

Ryan's Group Block 2 Cyberbullying Draft

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

Ryan and Sabrena,
What we really liked about your video was the music and how it kept up with the pace of all the videos. It showed your creativeness and it worked out good. The way that certain scenes were edited to speed up or slow down was really good. Overall it was ok and it all flowed together well.
Jacob D and Cole D

Anonymous said...

what we liked best about the video was the beginning how it went from normal to a faster speed of time. like when the kids were walking by. We thought this was effective because it gives the environment of the school and people there. how to get help was a main point and it had the phone number you could call. different music that went well together. cool credits liked the rolling credits.


Chris and Joselyn

Anonymous said...

what we best liked about your video was the begining because it showed that cyberbullying happens at school and to anyone . I liked the transitions of the music because it changed along with the mood of the video, which gave more of an affect on the situation. we also liked how you interviewed actual students on who they would go to if they were being cyberbullied. - ximena and ashley
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Anonymous said...

What we liked about your video was the montage at the beginning, going from slow to fast. I like Mr. Shallhorn's interview along with the music played during his interview. It gives you a sense of how unfortunate and serious cyberbullying is. We also like how the music went really well with the clips. We liked the fact with the visual of students. You should boost up the audio because you can't really hear it.

Michaela A. and Ashley T.

Anonymous said...

Jose and Skyler.
Group 16 you guys did a great job creating your video. We liked how it started off slow and then you sped everything up. At one point in time, the music was louder then the person who was being interviewed. However, the music in general added the correct tone that the film should be. You might think of adding in a few more interviews becuase we have a whole lot of people at this school, and you only interviewed a few people. All in all, you guys did a great job on your video project about cyberbullying.

Anonymous said...

What we liked best about your video was the music. It went with what was being talked about really well, and helped set the mood. The tip line was also a good idea. It lets anyone know who is watching the video that you can get help, but you dont have to let anyone know that it is you. Overall, we thought the whole video was really well edited. One thing to consider is the color of the titles. The words were black, and so on certain scenes you couldnt clearly read the names of some of the people.
-Isaiah and Kaycee

Anonymous said...

What we enjoyed the most about your video was first of all the beggining because it showed there were many people at our school. Then later on it showed that there is more to the school like cyberbulying that you dont see at first glance. The music was very good it not detracting from the video. It was also nice to see how people would deal with cyberbullying. I believe the message was how to deal with cyberbullying, for example it was interesting how you put a anynomous number to call. I sugjest putting music with the credits. Also on some interviews there was music and on others there wasn't. -Zoie & Kenzie

Anonymous said...

What we thought was the best part of the video was the introduction of the video in the opening shot, this was effective because it artfully displayed the vision of SBHS and the students that go here.Although the introduction was well executed, it went on for too long and the effect was slightly lacking because it did not show an immense amount of students or a significant contrast of the amount of students. The clip in our classroom was too quiet and was not emphasized enough. -Brad and Ivy

Anonymous said...

What we liked best about your vidoe was the begining scene, it transitioned froma slow pace to fast in a matter of seconds. We think that the counsler made some very good points about cyberbulling and the background music made him seem interesting. The lower third title when Mr. Schallhorn was speeking was a little dark, so we couldnt really see it. But he made some good points also. The interview was a little long also. We thought the order was good and it made a flow to your video.

Blanca Ceja & Michelle Hernandez

Anonymous said...

What we really like about your video was that the music was chosen very well and it set the mood properly. The opening was very strong and went well with the music. It was effective because it was a strong hook and caught the audience's attention. The message portrayed was well arranged, however Sabrina's voice was very low and that's one thing to check. The interviews were arranged well. The titles in the lower thirds of the interviews were hard to see, a simple change to make them more visible is all you need. Overall your video was very well produced.
-John and Eduardo B.

Anonymous said...

What we liked best about this video was the statistics. It effective because it gave a tangible fact on how serious of a problem cyberbullying really is. Another great part of the video was when you had Mr. Schellhorn. He had a lot of information about why it happens and how it happens. Another aspect we liked was the amount of student interveiws you guys had. It really showed that even our peer have and idea what it is anf how to stop it.

Anonymous said...

What we liked best about your video was how well edited it was. We really liked the opening scene and how it went from slow to fast. Also, how it showed the statistic when in the classroom. An issue we had with your video was that we didn't feel the music helped the mood much. Sorry.
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<3 Dillon and Marlee n

Anonymous said...

what i liked about the video was the beginning how it had students walking it transitioned from slow to fast and more people appeared because it showed how many people there are at the school and how thing can happen and occur with cyberbullying. I also liked the example of the fact of 1 and 5 people addmit to cyberbullying because it seemed real as the 5 students were at the table and talking. something you can add is you need to add more titles and on the people need to be identified with a title. I really liked the audio it transitioned into the mood and theme of the video. I thought this was effective because it really transitoned to what cyberbullying is and had a good theme.
Good Job :)
Emily Keezer

Anonymous said...

What we liked best about your video was the editing of the clips. The people that were interviewed the staff and a couple people that come to this school. The audio was good because it flowed with the whole video. WE especially liked the part where it shows a montage of people walking in front of the school. What needs to be worked upon was to show more clips of peolple to interview longer because i think they need to show more emotion and feeling about cybrbullying and what could be done to prevent it and to stop people to cyberbully.
Cesar and Eduardo E.

Anonymous said...

What we liked best about this video was the statistics. It effective because it gave a tangible fact on how serious of a problem cyberbullying really is. Another great part of the video was when you had Mr. Schellhorn. He had a lot of information about why it happens and how it happens. Another aspect we liked was the amount of student interveiws you guys had. It really showed that even our peer have and idea what it is anf how to stop it.

Jake and Krystian

Anonymous said...

Taylor L. Jose and Skyler.
Group 16 you guys did a great job creating your video. We liked how it started off slow and then you sped everything up. At one point in time, the music was louder then the person who was being interviewed. However, the music in general added the correct tone that the film should be. You might think of adding in a few more interviews becuase we have a whole lot of people at this school, and you only interviewed a few people. All in all, you guys did a great job on your video project about cyberbullying.