The conflict was between him eating the pizza he had won off his friend or giving it to his hungery sister. The shots that contributed to the rising action was the medium close- up of jake and john about to fight also the part were jake slaps john's hand away it was a close-up of the last piece of pizza The climax was when john gave the pizza over to Morgan During the resolution John and Jake express that they are still friends with the playful back and forth conversation. We especially like the pan-over of the pizza and table at the beginning of the video because is helped emphasize the idea of the last peice of pizza. we rated your editing a 8. We would just suggest shortening the fade-out clip after the fight. The first piece of music fit well because it was calm and light-hearted, a friendly scene. Then the vinyl scratching and the fighting music fit really well too. The most important audio was the vinyl scratching. It completely changed the tone of the scene in a dramatic way. No titles, but we noticed in the credits that the music you used wasn't credited. Overall, we thought your film was very good, and we can tell you worked really hard for this video.
story: The conflict was between who was going to eat the last piece of pizza. 1. Sitting and watching tv while eating the pizza. 2. Zoom in on the last piece of pizza. 3. When Jacob slaps john's hand. 4. The fight over the pizza. suggestions- 1. You could have added more talking between the two. 2. You could also make the fight last longer. The climax occured when Jacob offered the pizza to morgan. During the resolution Jacob gives the pizza to morgan. You could add to the resolution by showing some more facial expression, this would help us see how they feel about giving/recieving the pizza. CAMERA SHOTS: We especially like the close-up shot of the pizza, bacuase it helped emphasize the idea that it was important. We think you should replace the shot where you hold up the pizza so it doesent get lost in the sunlight. The new shot would be the same as before but change the lighting in it. EDITS: We rate the editing a 8. One edit we would change would be the edit when morgan walked into the room. We noticed that between the first and second shot you used a straight cut we would of used a fade to black in this instance. USE OF MUSIC AND SOUND EFFECTS: There was no music in this video. The most important use of the sound effects in this video was when you used the "fatality" words after the fight. TITLES AND CREDITS: The title reflected the content because it was about pizza and it said pizza in the title. I would make the title even bigger and centered. The credits were good because they were rolling. But the sound was not cited correctly. OVERALL- Overall, We thought your film was good. What we liked best was the use of the house as a background and the edits. Our strongest suggestion is that you cite your sources because you can get into trouble for that. REVIEWED BY CHRIS AND BRAD
STORY The conflict was between who was going to get the last piece of pizza Here are the shots, dialog and actons that contributed to the rising action: 1. when you see that their is only one piece left 2. when the two characters look each other dead in the eye. we really like the rising action. The climax occured when the characters fought with each other In the resolution, Jake gives Morgan the pizza. CAMERA SHOTS We especially like the close up shot of John on the floor because it showed that Jake won the pizza EDITS: on a scale of 1-10 we rate the editing an 10. The first use of music is at the beggining to show its just a casual day for them. TITLES AND CREDITS the title was good, it showed that a conflict was going to happen over pizza. the credits were also good, but they did not cite their music sources. OVERALL overall we thought your film was good. -Isaiah S and Cesar J
The conflict was between the guys and sharing their pizza with someone who hadn't eaten all day. The shots that contributed to the rising action was the pan of the messy table and the last piece of pizza. We also liked the close up of the hand slap. You dont really need to add anything. The climax occured when the hand was slapped, and when they fight over the pizza. The resolution is when the guy gives the girl the pizza. We especially liked the pan in the beginning of the table, and at the end of the guy on the floor. We also like the close up of both guys when they are confused about hearing the voice, and the high angle of them looking around the room. On a scale of 1-10, we rate the editing a 9.5. We thought when the screen went black between the argument and when jacob is holding the pizza was dramatic and effective. The music was worked well in the beginning when they were watching tv; it created a laid back feeling. The music when the guys start yelling at each other was most effective because it helped emphasise the tension. We really liked the "deep voice" toward the end of the black screen. The credits and the title were really good and everything was properly cited/put together. Overall we thought your film was amazing. We liked everything. Our stongest suggestion is somehow fixing the disappearing pizza when jacob is holding it at the end.
The conflict was between whether jacob should give the pizza to Morgan or eat it. Here are the shots, dialog and actions that contributed to the rising action: 1.There only being one piece left 2.Them fighting 3.Them laughing and being friends 4.Jacob standing on John. Here are some suggestions about adding to the rising action: 1.You could more dialog 2. You could also add another character. The climax occurred when Morgan asked for the pizza. During the resoulution Jacob gives the pizza to Morgan and gets off pf John. You could add top the resolution by adding a little more dialog. This would help give us the idea that he was happy with his decision.
We especially like the close up shot of john on the floor beacause it helped emphasize that they had just fought.
On a scale of 1-10, we rate your editing an 8.5.
The first time music camein was when John and Jacob were about to fight. It was used to help emphasize the mood of action. It worked because it was actiony kind of song.
The title of the film reflects the content. It did grab my attention. The credits were done properly. Nothing was cited.
Overall, we thought that the film was funny. What we liked best was that how you got across your message with humor.
The conflict was between whether jacob should give the pizza to Morgan or eat it. Here are the shots, dialog and actions that contributed to the rising action: 1.There only being one piece left 2.Them fighting 3.Them laughing and being friends 4.Jacob standing on John. Here are some suggestions about adding to the rising action: 1.You could more dialog 2. You could also add another character. The climax occurred when Morgan asked for the pizza. During the resoulution Jacob gives the pizza to Morgan and gets off pf John. You could add top the resolution by adding a little more dialog. This would help give us the idea that he was happy with his decision.
We especially like the close up shot of john on the floor beacause it helped emphasize that they had just fought.
On a scale of 1-10, we rate your editing an 8.5.
The first time music camein was when John and Jacob were about to fight. It was used to help emphasize the mood of action. It worked because it was actiony kind of song.
The title of the film reflects the content. It did grab my attention. The credits were done properly. Nothing was cited.
Overall, we thought that the film was funny. What we liked best was that how you got across your message with humor.
6 comments:
Feedback Michaela c and Ashley T
The conflict was between him eating the pizza he had won off his friend or giving it to his hungery sister.
The shots that contributed to the rising action was the medium close- up of jake and john about to fight also the part were jake slaps john's hand away it was a close-up of the last piece of pizza
The climax was when john gave the pizza over to Morgan
During the resolution John and Jake express that they are still friends with the playful back and forth conversation.
We especially like the pan-over of the pizza and table at the beginning of the video because is helped emphasize the idea of the last peice of pizza.
we rated your editing a 8. We would just suggest shortening the fade-out clip after the fight.
The first piece of music fit well because it was calm and light-hearted, a friendly scene. Then the vinyl scratching and the fighting music fit really well too. The most important audio was the vinyl scratching. It completely changed the tone of the scene in a dramatic way.
No titles, but we noticed in the credits that the music you used wasn't credited.
Overall, we thought your film was very good, and we can tell you worked really hard for this video.
story: The conflict was between who was going to eat the last piece of pizza. 1. Sitting and watching tv while eating the pizza. 2. Zoom in on the last piece of pizza. 3. When Jacob slaps john's hand. 4. The fight over the pizza.
suggestions- 1. You could have added more talking between the two.
2. You could also make the fight last longer.
The climax occured when Jacob offered the pizza to morgan.
During the resolution Jacob gives the pizza to morgan. You could add to the resolution by showing some more facial expression, this would help us see how they feel about giving/recieving the pizza.
CAMERA SHOTS: We especially like the close-up shot of the pizza, bacuase it helped emphasize the idea that it was important.
We think you should replace the shot where you hold up the pizza so it doesent get lost in the sunlight. The new shot would be the same as before but change the lighting in it. EDITS: We rate the editing a 8. One edit we would change would be the edit when morgan walked into the room. We noticed that between the first and second shot you used a straight cut we would of used a fade to black in this instance.
USE OF MUSIC AND SOUND EFFECTS:
There was no music in this video. The most important use of the sound effects in this video was when you used the "fatality" words after the fight.
TITLES AND CREDITS: The title reflected the content because it was about pizza and it said pizza in the title. I would make the title even bigger and centered. The credits were good because they were rolling. But the sound was not cited correctly. OVERALL- Overall, We thought your film was good. What we liked best was the use of the house as a background and the edits. Our strongest suggestion is that you cite your sources because you can get into trouble for that. REVIEWED BY CHRIS AND BRAD
STORY
The conflict was between who was going to get the last piece of pizza
Here are the shots, dialog and actons that contributed to the rising action:
1. when you see that their is only one piece left
2. when the two characters look each other dead in the eye.
we really like the rising action. The climax occured when the characters fought with each other
In the resolution, Jake gives Morgan the pizza.
CAMERA SHOTS
We especially like the close up shot of John on the floor because it showed that Jake won the pizza
EDITS:
on a scale of 1-10 we rate the editing an 10. The first use of music is at the beggining to show its just a casual day for them.
TITLES AND CREDITS
the title was good, it showed that a conflict was going to happen over pizza. the credits were also good, but they did not cite their music sources.
OVERALL
overall we thought your film was good.
-Isaiah S and Cesar J
Feedback by Kelsey and Kaycee
The conflict was between the guys and sharing their pizza with someone who hadn't eaten all day. The shots that contributed to the rising action was the pan of the messy table and the last piece of pizza. We also liked the close up of the hand slap. You dont really need to add anything. The climax occured when the hand was slapped, and when they fight over the pizza. The resolution is when the guy gives the girl the pizza.
We especially liked the pan in the beginning of the table, and at the end of the guy on the floor. We also like the close up of both guys when they are confused about hearing the voice, and the high angle of them looking around the room. On a scale of 1-10, we rate the editing a 9.5. We thought when the screen went black between the argument and when jacob is holding the pizza was dramatic and effective. The music was worked well in the beginning when they were watching tv; it created a laid back feeling. The music when the guys start yelling at each other was most effective because it helped emphasise the tension.
We really liked the "deep voice" toward the end of the black screen.
The credits and the title were really good and everything was properly cited/put together.
Overall we thought your film was amazing. We liked everything. Our stongest suggestion is somehow fixing the disappearing pizza when jacob is holding it at the end.
The conflict was between whether jacob should give the pizza to Morgan or eat it.
Here are the shots, dialog and actions that contributed to the rising action:
1.There only being one piece left
2.Them fighting
3.Them laughing and being friends
4.Jacob standing on John.
Here are some suggestions about adding to the rising action:
1.You could more dialog
2. You could also add another character.
The climax occurred when Morgan asked for the pizza.
During the resoulution Jacob gives the pizza to Morgan and gets off pf John.
You could add top the resolution by adding a little more dialog. This would help give us the idea that he was happy with his decision.
We especially like the close up shot of john on the floor beacause it helped emphasize that they had just fought.
On a scale of 1-10, we rate your editing an 8.5.
The first time music camein was when John and Jacob were about to fight. It was used to help emphasize the mood of action. It worked because it was actiony kind of song.
The title of the film reflects the content. It did grab my attention.
The credits were done properly. Nothing was cited.
Overall, we thought that the film was funny. What we liked best was that how you got across your message with humor.
The conflict was between whether jacob should give the pizza to Morgan or eat it.
Here are the shots, dialog and actions that contributed to the rising action:
1.There only being one piece left
2.Them fighting
3.Them laughing and being friends
4.Jacob standing on John.
Here are some suggestions about adding to the rising action:
1.You could more dialog
2. You could also add another character.
The climax occurred when Morgan asked for the pizza.
During the resoulution Jacob gives the pizza to Morgan and gets off pf John.
You could add top the resolution by adding a little more dialog. This would help give us the idea that he was happy with his decision.
We especially like the close up shot of john on the floor beacause it helped emphasize that they had just fought.
On a scale of 1-10, we rate your editing an 8.5.
The first time music camein was when John and Jacob were about to fight. It was used to help emphasize the mood of action. It worked because it was actiony kind of song.
The title of the film reflects the content. It did grab my attention.
The credits were done properly. Nothing was cited.
Overall, we thought that the film was funny. What we liked best was that how you got across your message with humor.
Michaela and Cole
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