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Thursday, November 10, 2011

Block 2 Michaela's Group Cyberbullying Draft

12 comments:

  1. What we liked best about your video was how you guys ended the video with squares. It was nice and we thought it was effective because it successfully grabbed our attention. We really enjoyed the song. It was tasteful and sad. We loved it anyway. We give you five stars.

    <3 Dillon and Marleen

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  2. What we liked best about your video was the part that showed the girl at home in her room on facebook it was unique. also the good interview with the counselor and his real life story. we thought this was effective because it shows that it can happen anywhere. strongly showed what cyber bullying is. the music went well with the video. the music could of been lowered in the interview with the counselor. credits and title were well done.

    Chris and Joselyn

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  3. The end transition into the credits was done very well because it showed a variation of the effects of cyberbullying. On the other hand the sound of the music was very loud during the interview, and the titles were a little high on the interviewers. Also the intro should have been longer and the video of the computer could have been a little bit shorter. Also the point of the video was a little bit unclear. Also the credits should have had peoples last names as well as thier first. Should have put more emphasis on one main point. I GOT YOUR BACK!!!! -Brad and Ivy

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  4. what we liked best about your video was how you organized your clips and how they transitioned into eachother.Also how your music faded during the clips and we thought this was effective because when the volune was lowered during the interview it made it easier to hear what the person had to say.We liked how the video opened up with clips from different sites where cyberbullying can happen.We really liked how you ended the video with the foursquare theme it made it interesting and cought our attention - ximena and ashley

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  5. What we liked best about your video was the scene of the girl being cyberbullied at home. We thought this was effective because it gave us a feeling that it really does happen anywhere. The sound was well done, but we think the song should have been lowered a bit more when people are being interviewed or narrating. The conclusion that depicted the four screens with each of the members concluding the video was well edited. Overall we thought the video was arranged and presented very well.
    -John and Eduardo B.

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  6. What we liked best about your video was that it really got the point across. We really liked the clip where the girl was at home on her computer because that showed that cyberbullying happens at home as well as at school. We thought that this video was effective becuase the music fit the mood very well. It also was the same track throughout the whole video, which contributed to it's effectiveness and drama.

    -Isaiah and Kaycee

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  7. What we liked best about your video was the ending was very unique and professional looking. Also we liked the music in the back ground and how it played through the entire video. We thought it was effective because it set the mood of the whole entire video and the gravity of the overall situation. The only critique we have is that the clip when you interviewed Ricky, it didn't seem like it was completely serious. It seemed like he was just saying it to be funny.

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  8. What we liked about your video was the interview with Mr. C, especially with the way he gave a specific example of a student who was being cyberbullied. We thought this was effective because it brings the audience to a deeper level of understanding that this issue isn't just something people are talking about and that it really does hurt the people around us. What hooked us was what Mr. C he actually gave alot of detail to what cyberbullying is. We think that the main points of the video were addressed perfectly, but the volume levels should definitely be adjusted to make them constant throughout the entire video. the music choice was fantastic. The song was very mellow and the lyrics were deep and meaningful. This really emphasized the seriousness of the topic.
    Love always,
    Ryan and Sabrena

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  9. What we liked about your video was the home scene and the music that went along with the video. The song gave the correct effect for cyberbyllying being bad.
    The beginning scene was eye catching because it gave examples of where cyberbullying occurs. Then it also seemed like a news report. Although the music was good i suggest lowering the volume when the interviewee's were talking. I was listening to the lyrics and not what Mr.
    C was saying. we understood the message that cyberbullying has negative effects. (Zoie, Kenzie)

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  10. Skyler and Jose
    What we liked best about your video was the ending, The ending pretty much sealed the deal and nobody was left out from it i liked the way you guys put a square and your team was put in it all together. Ricky's Interview should be removed because he was not taking the matter seriously and the tone of this video should be meant to be serious. Another thing is that the music in the backround was too loud when people were talking, it was hard to hear them speak and show what they had to say and feel about cyberbullying. One thing you guys can work on is camera angles, for example tyler's interview was showing too much on top then his upper chest/head. it just looked awkward. Overall this video was very well done but there were a few minor errors.

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  11. What we liked best about your video was the editing of the clips. The people that were interviewed were mixed and not from our class. The audio was good because it shows the mood of the overall video. It gave me the mood to understand how cyberbullying could effect someone, it was a sad feeling. WE especially liked the part where it cut to the house. But we still understood. What needs to be worked upon is the spelling of words. we they should have done better was to show that stranger in her house with more clips to show her effects of cyberbullying, like to watch her deal with it and tying to do to something about it
    Cesar and Eduardo

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  12. What we liked best about your video was the editing of the clips. The people that were interviewed were mixed and not from our class. The audio was good because it shows the mood of the overall video. It gave me the mood to understand how cyberbullying could effect someone, it was a sad feeling. WE especially liked the part where it cut to the house. But we still understood. What needs to be worked upon is the spelling of words. we they should have done better was to show that stranger in her house with more clips to show her effects of cyberbullying, like to watch her deal with it and tying to do to something about it
    Cesar and Eduardo E

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