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Monday, November 14, 2011

Brad's Group Block 2 Cyberbullying draft

18 comments:

  1. what we liked most about your video is your choise of music, very catchy. Another thing we liked about your video was how you used real situations were people were being cyberbullied and cyberbullying others. - ximena and ashley :3

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  2. What we liked best about your video was the up-beat music and how they showed personal interviews showing it can happen to anyone, a specific example is CJ and he got cyberbullied. What we thought was most effective was because it helped people understand that it can happen to anyone. Also when joceline came to bradely and looked like she said something, when she left it looked like she was getting help for him. The blackscreen in the end was too long and the beginning started off too up beat.
    Michelle Hernandez Blanca Ceja

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  3. What we liked about your video was the people you chose to interview. It was effective because they had personal stories either being cyberbullied or being the bully. We also like the mini story in the beginning that helped show how hurtful cyberbullying can be. One thing to think about improving is the intro. The intro with just a black screen and music dragged on for a little too long. The only other audio part we thought could be fixed was the people's voices in the interviews. They were a little quiet and hard to hear.
    -Isaiah and Kaycee

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  4. What we liked about your video was that it started with a story that explained what cyberbullying is. We also liked how you had your friends do the interviews. It made it a little bit more relatable. One thing we would change is the music at the beginning was a little long for just being a blank screen. We thought that the type of music used in your video worked really well with the over all message of your video.

    Michaela A., and Emily

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  5. What we liked best about your video was how you you gave examples of what cyberbullying can be like. For example, when it showed Chris being cyberbullied. We thought this was effective because it shows us that anyone can be cyberbullied.
    The only bad thing we can point out in this video was the editing of the credits. It seemed as if the credits were actually longer than the actual video it was crediting.
    <3 Dillon and Marleen.

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  6. Jose and Skyler
    Group 13, you guys did a great job on your video. We like the background music and how you made up a little story of a kid being cyberbullied at the beginning of the video to show the veiwer what the video is going to be about. The clips of the interviews could be shortened a little bit to cut out things that do not have to be there. Also, the sound of the people who are interviewed need to be highered a little bit, you cannot hear all of what they say very well. Our favorite part of was when the screen went black and all you could hear is a cell phone vibrating, we thought that that part of the video was extremely creative. Job well done Group 13!!

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  7. Chris, Joselyn, and Brad.
    What we liked best about your video was the music and how at the end it came back in with the credits. We liked how in the beginning and throughout the video there seemed to be a story going on. it was also good how you got people from our school to share their cyberbullying stories.

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  8. What we liked best about your video was the music in the bacground. We thought it was very effective because it created the mood and was very dramatic especially at the start of the credits where it sort of cut out. We also liked the clip in the beginning where Chris goes to the computer and sees the rude message. It really sets the tone for the rest of the video. It showed how people can get hurt over those messages.

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  9. What I liked best about your video was that you interviewed people who seemed unlikely victims of cyberbullying. I think the beginning was good, but I would just change the beggining audio. It seemed to distract me a little bit form the point of the video. I think you did well in getting the whole message across, you showed an example of cyberbullying and showed students together,a nd even kids who had been victims themselves. The audio was good, it gave an intense feeling to the overall video. The ending was mostly well, you knew what you had to change so other than that, good job. Your video was catchy and related to the students.
    Ashley T

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  10. What we liked best about your video was the story in the beginning of the video because it was humerouse yet we understood it was a serious issue. Also it showed what websites cyberbullying occur in. The interviews were interesting because it showed that anyone can be cyberbullyed, it was surprising to see they actually told personal stories. The music was intense and went well with the video. Although something you could do to make it better you could add some true facts about cyberbullying or statistics.
    -Zoie & Kenzie

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  11. Chris, Joselyn, and Brad.
    What we liked best about your video was the music and how at the end it came back in with the credits. We liked how in the beginning and throughout the video there seemed to be a story going on. it was also good how you got people from our school to share their cyberbullying stories.

    Jacob D and Cole D

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  12. What we liked a lot about the video was the interview section because the interviewees got really personal and told their stories from the <3 (heart). We thought this was effective because we never thought that these students would be victims of cyberbullying. Another thing our group really liked wes the music it went real well with the video because of the story of the boy being bullied in the beginning. Also, the song hit a soft point when people were talking and when they were done, the drop hit and it added a very dramatic effect to the video. In order to improve the video, we agreed that the interview clips should have had less background noise and the voices of the interviewees should have been louder.
    Love always,
    Ryan and Sabrena

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  13. What we liked best about your video was the music fit the mood the video. We thought this was effective because it set a mood of something bad was going to happen. Like in the intro where chris was cyberbullied right there. The music didnt transition to well. It went from loud to low and back to loud. Overall the arrangement gave a well driven mood.
    -Jonn and Eduardo B.

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  14. The best part of the video was the music selection, I thought it was effective especially in the beginning of the video because it caught the viewer's attention. From the traumatic/horrific screams and crashes in the beginning, to the intensity in the music I was immensely intrigued. I felt the story involving Chris offered an excellent perspective to the issue because it created more of a connection between the viewer and the subject. Therefore, the viewer was more affected by the idea of the subject being bullied. The opening scene offered Chris' seemingly tough persona with his friends, but quickly transitioned into the idea that Chris was a bully of cyberbullying. I felt like the interviews should be louder and possibly intertwined into the middle of the video after Chris' story, because the "one word..." scene would be an effective ending the the video. -Ivy

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  15. What we liked best about your video was the editing of the clips. The people that were interviewed the people were his friends and were the people were the least expected people to ever been cyberbullied or being the cyberbully. The audio was good because at first it was a low calm sound between the people and then changed into a bigger dramatic sound that shows the mood. WE especially liked the part where it shows a little video of Chris being cyberbullied in facebook. What needs to be worked upon was to show more clips of peolple to interview because they realy did not show a lot of interviews.
    Cesar and Eduardo

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  16. What we liked best about your video was the music in the background. We thought it was very effective because it created the mood and was very dramatic especially at the start of the credits where it sort of cut out. We also liked the clip in the beginning where Chris goes to the computer and sees the rude message. It really sets the tone for the rest of the video. It showed how people can get hurt over those messages.

    Jake and Krystian

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  17. What we liked best about your video was the editing of the clips. The people that were interviewed the people were his friends and were the people were the least expected people to ever been cyberbullied or being the cyberbully. The audio was good because at first it was a low calm sound between the people and then changed into a bigger dramatic sound that shows the mood. WE especially liked the part where it shows a little video of Chris being cyberbullied in facebook. What needs to be worked upon was to show more clips of peolple to interview because they realy did not show a lot of interviews.
    Cesar and Eduardo E

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  18. Taylor L. Jose and Skyler
    Group 13, you guys did a great job on your video. We like the background music and how you made up a little story of a kid being cyberbullied at the beginning of the video to show the veiwer what the video is going to be about. The clips of the interviews could be shortened a little bit to cut out things that do not have to be there. Also, the sound of the people who are interviewed need to be highered a little bit, you cannot hear all of what they say very well. Our favorite part of was when the screen went black and all you could hear is a cell phone vibrating, we thought that that part of the video was extremely creative. Job well done Group 13!!

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