michael and maria, we really like how there was a lot of information so it could help people out or just give them an idea what cyberbullying is about. in my opinion i really enjoyed the ending because it gave me a sense of comfort and it made the video complete. in the future you could probably put more clips of you guys because it would help the people out who are watching the video.
Demi&Cody What we really liked about your video was that it had alot of information to offer and inform people about cyberbullying. The message got across, yet since that sound was so low it made hard to hear everything.We really enjoyed your conclusion and how you guys decided to recored that. It was a good contrast from the pictures, and that way it was set up was really comforting.It was a good video , yet improvment can be made, such as volume. and less pictures, possibly an interveiw would help improve the video.
What we liked best about the video is that it contained plenty of facts to inform the viewer with. The opening scene is very weak and it is very boring. I think the message was great. The video needs work with the sound editing; should raise the volume of the speakers. Also, excessive ambient noise should have been avoided. Nice credits. Nice effort. -Luis & Vanessa
What we liked best about your video was it had a lot of facts. We thought this was effective because it helped the viewers understand cyberbullying. Your opening scene was a little weak, it did not really hook the viewers. The main points were difficult to hear, you need to change the audio gain so we can hear you. While you were narrating there were a bunch of pictures to look at. There was not any music you should add some and make it audible. Yeah we like you conclusin just make the noise louder. Your titles and credits were consistent. Love: Alicia and Sam
What we liked about the video is the ending, because it captivated the audience. We thought this was effective because it showed a sense of comfort when they were both together. We think that they should add some music to the video. Cyberbullying is dangerous. They should focus on certain parts of the picture. They should add music. The ending was the best part of the video because it had actual people. No the title and ending did not capture my attention. The title was done correctly.
What we liked best about your video was how it became perosnal in the end. It was effective becuase showed a more emotional comfort.
The opener was not that attention grabbing, it was boring and had no spark to it.
The main point was to give facts and inform us about cyberbullying.
I could not hear any of the narration it was WAY too quiet.
I think music needs to be added somewhere. It was just the narrators talkin throughout the whole thing. Very blan.
You need more FILM instead of pictures. Adding more film will make it more personal and less factorial. Personla is something the audience can understand. Add music to help grasp our attention.
There were only two titles, the opener and the closer titles. They were decent.
What we liked best about this video is the ending when the 2 of you are talking together because we felt a hint of prtection. We thought this was effective because it showed that there is always a friend or person that will be there for you. The opening scene did not catch our attention because there was no emphasis on cyberbullying and no music to make us want to watch. We know that the main point is that cyberbullying is a serious thing but from watching the video we did not really catch the idea. The voice overs were very low and hard to understand but there was a lot of good facts included. The conclusin was the best because there were no more pictures. The important message was that everyone should understand that cyberbullying is no joke! The credits were very well done and were at a perfect speed! The video was definitely successful and unique!
What we like about this video was the ending how the two narrators were sitting close to eachother. For example the end with the two narrators made the audience feel like it was a serious and personal video. We thouight this was effective becuase they had alot of useful information to back everything up and the pictures also gave us a visual of the facts and a visual of how bad cyberbullying is. The opening scene does not hook the viewer as strong as it could. Maybe next time your group can incorporate music, sounds, or even a scene with actors. The main points are to not get involved with a serious issue like cyberbullying because it can lead to a unfortunate event. During the narration, the audience is looking at all the picture being shown throughout the video. Your final summation was, in our prespective, the best part of the video becuase it made us it brought a comfortable but serious feel into our souls.
What we liked best about your video was the scene at the end. It brought out how you always have one there for you. The opening scene showed how the lady felt alone. A way to strengthen the scene would be to add sad music. Main points were brought out in all the facts you used in your video. Ideas that can bring out your main points more would be to get information on who to go to. The audience was looking at a lot of pictures, maybe you can break that up with more footage of interviews. There was no sound or music so maybe you can add some background music. The final thought was the most important message because it brought of sense of comfort for those who are cyberbullied and it really brought out the main point. The credits were done really well and you could tell they spent a lot of time on them. Our last suggestion would be to add more footage of interviews. Liz Quezada and Denise Torres
What we liked best about your video was that at the end when the two of you were talking together; it created a sense of help and comradery. The opening scene is a low voice with an image that lasts for too long of a period. You could put music, a louder narration, more images, some recording from the camera, and some intersting facts. There is no narration, no footage (with the exception of 3 seconds). There was no emphasis on anything. There was too much narration and it was too quiet to hear. You should add more camera footage, some music, and more visual things (titles, music, cellphones, computers) and interactivity. There was no music, and we suggest that you use music to emphasize whatever you were attempting to emphasize. Every part of the video could use music to add some pizzaz. i could not even understand what tghe message was because there was limited music, footage, and images. We suggest you use more footage, more music, and redo your voice-overs because they are too quiet. Add more images. There is a title and it doesn't really grab our attention. Maybe you should use a different font and some music; it also ran for a long time, so try to shorten it. There were no experts; it seemed like a powerpoint. There was only one title and the credits were Really good with the color and rolling. I would add more fottage, have an expert interview, music, students, and everything.
We think that your opening title could have been more creative to grab the viewers attention. The voice overs seemed to be to repetitive but you guys had a lot of good information. Also we think that there needs to be breaks between the voice overs to give the viewing audience a break and let the information that was just said sink in. We liked your ending, it gave that sense of comfortableness and safety. At times the message was hard to follow because there was so much of it said with no breaks. Also the video seemed rough we think that you guys can make it smother, but you guys had a good video with lots of information.
What we liked about the video is the ending, because it captivated the audience. We thought this was effective because it showed a sense of comfort when they were both together. We think that they should add some music to the video. Cyberbullying is dangerous. They should focus on certain parts of the picture. They should add music. The ending was the best part of the video because it had actual people. No the title and ending did not capture my attention. The title was done correctly.
What we liked best about your video was how it became perosnal in the end. It was effective becuase showed a more emotional comfort.
The opener was not that attention grabbing, it was boring and had no spark to it.
The main point was to give facts and inform us about cyberbullying.
I could not hear any of the narration it was WAY too quiet.
I think music needs to be added somewhere. It was just the narrators talkin throughout the whole thing. Very blan.
You need more FILM instead of pictures. Adding more film will make it more personal and less factorial. Personla is something the audience can understand. Add music to help grasp our attention.
There were only two titles, the opener and the closer titles. They were decent.
What we like about this video was the ending how the two narrators were sitting close to eachother. For example the end with the two narrators made the audience feel like it was a serious and personal video. We thouight this was effective becuase they had alot of useful information to back everything up and the pictures also gave us a visual of the facts and a visual of how bad cyberbullying is. The opening scene does not hook the viewer as strong as it could. Maybe next time your group can incorporate music, sounds, or even a scene with actors. The main points are to not get involved with a serious issue like cyberbullying because it can lead to a unfortunate event. During the narration, the audience is looking at all the picture being shown throughout the video. Your final summation was, in our prespective, the best part of the video becuase it made us it brought a comfortable but serious feel into our souls.
What we liked about your video was the variety of images you guys chose to go with your video. We thought this was effective because we could see how people feel when they have been or are a victium of cyberbulling. The opening scene was great. The main points that are being made about cyberbulling are that it affects alot of people and the consequences of it. The speaking part of this video was a little quiet. Maybe some interviews would be cool too. We didn't really see a conclusion. We really like the end credits though. Good job!!
What we liked best about the video was the end, because it gave the video a bit of variety. We thought this was effective because it sent the final message across to the video. Even though there was no music included in the beginning, the opening image caught our attention. The picture, however, was shown for a bit too long, and it could cause some people to lose interest in the video. The level of volume could have been a bit louder, because it was very hard to hear what either narrator was saying.
michael and maria, we really like how there was a lot of information so it could help people out or just give them an idea what cyberbullying is about. in my opinion i really enjoyed the ending because it gave me a sense of comfort and it made the video complete. in the future you could probably put more clips of you guys because it would help the people out who are watching the video.
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ReplyDeleteWhat we really liked about your video was that it had alot of information to offer and inform people about cyberbullying. The message got across, yet since that sound was so low it made hard to hear everything.We really enjoyed your conclusion and how you guys decided to recored that. It was a good contrast from the pictures, and that way it was set up was really comforting.It was a good video , yet improvment can be made, such as volume. and less pictures, possibly an interveiw would help improve the video.
What we liked best about the video is that it contained plenty of facts to inform the viewer with. The opening scene is very weak and it is very boring. I think the message was great. The video needs work with the sound editing; should raise the volume of the speakers. Also, excessive ambient noise should have been avoided. Nice credits. Nice effort.
ReplyDelete-Luis & Vanessa
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ReplyDeleteWhat we liked best about your video was it had a lot of facts. We thought this was effective because it helped the viewers understand cyberbullying. Your opening scene was a little weak, it did not really hook the viewers. The main points were difficult to hear, you need to change the audio gain so we can hear you. While you were narrating there were a bunch of pictures to look at. There was not any music you should add some and make it audible. Yeah we like you conclusin just make the noise louder. Your titles and credits were consistent.
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What we liked about the video is the ending, because it captivated the audience. We thought this was effective because it showed a sense of comfort when they were both together. We think that they should add some music to the video. Cyberbullying is dangerous. They should focus on certain parts of the picture. They should add music. The ending was the best part of the video because it had actual people. No the title and ending did not capture my attention. The title was done correctly.
ReplyDeleteWhat we liked best about your video was how it became perosnal in the end. It was effective becuase showed a more emotional comfort.
ReplyDeleteThe opener was not that attention grabbing, it was boring and had no spark to it.
The main point was to give facts and inform us about cyberbullying.
I could not hear any of the narration it was WAY too quiet.
I think music needs to be added somewhere. It was just the narrators talkin throughout the whole thing. Very blan.
You need more FILM instead of pictures. Adding more film will make it more personal and less factorial. Personla is something the audience can understand. Add music to help grasp our attention.
There were only two titles, the opener and the closer titles. They were decent.
What we liked best about this video is the ending when the 2 of you are talking together because we felt a hint of prtection. We thought this was effective because it showed that there is always a friend or person that will be there for you. The opening scene did not catch our attention because there was no emphasis on cyberbullying and no music to make us want to watch. We know that the main point is that cyberbullying is a serious thing but from watching the video we did not really catch the idea. The voice overs were very low and hard to understand but there was a lot of good facts included. The conclusin was the best because there were no more pictures. The important message was that everyone should understand that cyberbullying is no joke! The credits were very well done and were at a perfect speed! The video was definitely successful and unique!
ReplyDeleteWhat we like about this video was the ending how the two narrators were sitting close to eachother. For example the end with the two narrators made the audience feel like it was a serious and personal video. We thouight this was effective becuase they had alot of useful information to back everything up and the pictures also gave us a visual of the facts and a visual of how bad cyberbullying is. The opening scene does not hook the viewer as strong as it could. Maybe next time your group can incorporate music, sounds, or even a scene with actors. The main points are to not get involved with a serious issue like cyberbullying because it can lead to a unfortunate event. During the narration, the audience is looking at all the picture being shown throughout the video. Your final summation was, in our prespective, the best part of the video becuase it made us it brought a comfortable but serious feel into our souls.
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ReplyDeleteWhat we liked best about your video was the scene at the end. It brought out how you always have one there for you. The opening scene showed how the lady felt alone. A way to strengthen the scene would be to add sad music. Main points were brought out in all the facts you used in your video. Ideas that can bring out your main points more would be to get information on who to go to. The audience was looking at a lot of pictures, maybe you can break that up with more footage of interviews. There was no sound or music so maybe you can add some background music. The final thought was the most important message because it brought of sense of comfort for those who are cyberbullied and it really brought out the main point. The credits were done really well and you could tell they spent a lot of time on them. Our last suggestion would be to add more footage of interviews.
ReplyDeleteLiz Quezada and Denise Torres
What we liked best about your video was that at the end when the two of you were talking together; it created a sense of help and comradery. The opening scene is a low voice with an image that lasts for too long of a period. You could put music, a louder narration, more images, some recording from the camera, and some intersting facts. There is no narration, no footage (with the exception of 3 seconds). There was no emphasis on anything. There was too much narration and it was too quiet to hear. You should add more camera footage, some music, and more visual things (titles, music, cellphones, computers) and interactivity. There was no music, and we suggest that you use music to emphasize whatever you were attempting to emphasize. Every part of the video could use music to add some pizzaz. i could not even understand what tghe message was because there was limited music, footage, and images. We suggest you use more footage, more music, and redo your voice-overs because they are too quiet. Add more images. There is a title and it doesn't really grab our attention. Maybe you should use a different font and some music; it also ran for a long time, so try to shorten it. There were no experts; it seemed like a powerpoint. There was only one title and the credits were Really good with the color and rolling. I would add more fottage, have an expert interview, music, students, and everything.
ReplyDeleteWe think that your opening title could have been more creative to grab the viewers attention. The voice overs seemed to be to repetitive but you guys had a lot of good information. Also we think that there needs to be breaks between the voice overs to give the viewing audience a break and let the information that was just said sink in. We liked your ending, it gave that sense of comfortableness and safety. At times the message was hard to follow because there was so much of it said with no breaks. Also the video seemed rough we think that you guys can make it smother, but you guys had a good video with lots of information.
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ReplyDeleteWhat we liked about the video is the ending, because it captivated the audience. We thought this was effective because it showed a sense of comfort when they were both together. We think that they should add some music to the video. Cyberbullying is dangerous. They should focus on certain parts of the picture. They should add music. The ending was the best part of the video because it had actual people. No the title and ending did not capture my attention. The title was done correctly.
ReplyDelete-Hayley and Laura
What we liked best about your video was how it became perosnal in the end. It was effective becuase showed a more emotional comfort.
ReplyDeleteThe opener was not that attention grabbing, it was boring and had no spark to it.
The main point was to give facts and inform us about cyberbullying.
I could not hear any of the narration it was WAY too quiet.
I think music needs to be added somewhere. It was just the narrators talkin throughout the whole thing. Very blan.
You need more FILM instead of pictures. Adding more film will make it more personal and less factorial. Personla is something the audience can understand. Add music to help grasp our attention.
There were only two titles, the opener and the closer titles. They were decent.
What we like about this video was the ending how the two narrators were sitting close to eachother. For example the end with the two narrators made the audience feel like it was a serious and personal video. We thouight this was effective becuase they had alot of useful information to back everything up and the pictures also gave us a visual of the facts and a visual of how bad cyberbullying is. The opening scene does not hook the viewer as strong as it could. Maybe next time your group can incorporate music, sounds, or even a scene with actors. The main points are to not get involved with a serious issue like cyberbullying because it can lead to a unfortunate event. During the narration, the audience is looking at all the picture being shown throughout the video. Your final summation was, in our prespective, the best part of the video becuase it made us it brought a comfortable but serious feel into our souls.
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Kelsey R. & Cynthia N.
What we liked about your video was the variety of images you guys chose to go with your video. We thought this was effective because we could see how people feel when they have been or are a victium of cyberbulling. The opening scene was great. The main points that are being made about cyberbulling are that it affects alot of people and the consequences of it. The speaking part of this video was a little quiet. Maybe some interviews would be cool too. We didn't really see a conclusion. We really like the end credits though. Good job!!
ReplyDeleteZachary R. Andrade and Kayla Dawe
What we liked best about the video was the end, because it gave the video a bit of variety. We thought this was effective because it sent the final message across to the video.
ReplyDeleteEven though there was no music included in the beginning, the opening image caught our attention. The picture, however, was shown for a bit too long, and it could cause some people to lose interest in the video.
The level of volume could have been a bit louder, because it was very hard to hear what either narrator was saying.
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