Taylor L and Skyler Good job you Guys! We liked the music that you used throughout your video, it was techno-y and fit the situation at hand. One thing that you might consider fixing was raising the volume of the interviews and check all of your clips to see if any were cut off too early. We liked how you addressed facebook and had a lot of people talking about facebook, it was a very unique and interesting way to edit the video. We think that you guys did a great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What we liked best about your video was the clip of students walking by in the quad with the sounds of the students as well as music. Another thing we liked was the facebook clips and how it went to diffrent students then to a teacher who backed it up. Something that through us off a little bit was the abrupt Cuts of clips to add a slid in We think you could cut those out and make the video flow better.Good Job.
What I liked best about your video was the effective use of titles to reinforce the point that was being made. Another thing I really liked was the quick cuts when kids said facebook. I feel that that really helped drive the point home that a lot of people feel the same way about facebook being a main source of cyberbullying. What I think could be improved is that the interview with Mr.C seemed like it was zoomed out too far. I dont know if that can be fixed or not but that was the only problem I had with the video, overall a very well done video. -Brad
What we liked about your video was that you added titles during the video to not make it seem boring.We also liked how you put together the clips when they all said that cyberbulling happens on facebook.We think that you should add a title or start blank at the beggining because it started the interview too fast.The music was good but you could've added sound during the titles.You also need more information on cyberbulling because you didin't mention where you can get help and from who.
Dear Ivy's group, What we liked best about your video was the fast start. We thought that this was effective because it immediatly brings your attention in to the clip. One thing you can do to make the clip better was to go over and edit the out points because a few times they got cut to narrow and the voice got cut off. Overall it was a good video but the editing needs some work.
What we liked best about your video was the music and organization of it, how it flowed throughtout the video other then the middle of it, the part where three girls were saying something the clips went by a little too fast it cut off what she was saying. I also really liked when jacob asked where does cyberbullying happen most. And it showed clips of people saying "facebook". This was effective because it drew the audiences attention, it really makes you think about facebook and the things you say on it you should be aware of. by michelle Hernandez Blanca Ceja
What we enjoyed most about your video was the way to drew out the message that cyberbullying happens a lot on facebook. The introduction was also interesting because it didnt start out with a title. The titles in between the clips were also very well related to the topic that was talked about. Also i enjoyed the panoramic scene of the lunch tables. The music was pumped up in the right areas, escpecially in the credits the music was sad, its what i left my seat thinking about because its a serious issue. I suggest for the introduction to have a black screen with some music before having the opinion of the girl so the viewers have time to pay attention. -Zoie & Kenzie
What we liked best about your video was that it was sort of cyber feeling. We thought it was effective because it attracts more of a younger crowd. The main points in this video were very clear yet seemed a tad repeatative. The sound could have been improved in between clips. The transitions were a bit too fast and we couldn't really tell what was going on. At least it didn't bore us. The credits were quite humorous. We really liked it a lot. I, Marleen, am sorry for talking through it.
What we liked best about the video was the cuts of the Facebook clips. we liked that it jumped from so many people and it really emphasized the point that a lot of this happens on facebook. The opening scene was fine, we would just say that it jumped in pretty fast, and we kind of missed it. We felt you got your message across really well, especially by using the titles to really show what you were trying to say. Maybe adjusting the audio a bit would help the video, we noticed it went silent in some places. For the end, we agreed that it all went by really fast, and we missed what the girls were saying. We liked the credits, it gave a humorous effect to it, and it make the credits interesting. Overall it was a really good video. Good Job -Ashley T. and Juan A.
What we liked about your video was when all the people continuously were saying how facebook was the main source for cyberbullying. We also liiked how the titles were cyber oriented.You guys should have put more music during transitions because it got a little boring and plain. The backround during your interviews was rather noisy. Maybe next time you can try and quiet the people in the backround or go to a secluded area. What we got out of this video is that facebook is where all the problems start for cyberbullying and people should be more careful about who they let view their site. Sincercly, Taylor Powell and Sabrena Soto
What we liked about the video was the way you got the point across. We really liked how there would be a question, and then the interviews that answered that question. It was very effective. We also liked the statement about Facebook, and then all the quick cuts to people mentioning Facebook. The quick cuts to multiple people saying "Facebook" helped emphasize the dangers of Facebook. One suggestion would be to go back and make sure the cuts were clean. We noticed some people got cut off when they were talking. The person talking at the beginning somewhat got lost because we think it was too quick for an opening. -Isaiah and Kaycee
What we liked about your video was the editing of the clips. The people that were interviewed the are variatized and the responses they gave were very good like the one word responses. The audio was good because it set the mood and fit the people about their topic. WE especially liked the part where it shows clips cut to the people with the use of titles. What needs to be worked upon was the cutting of clips because they were too fast instead of having a smoother flow and the titles need to last longer because they kind of appeared out of nowhere and hard to read. Cesar and Eduardo E
What we liked best about your video was the titles and how it introduced the interviewers's answer. It was effective because it caught the audience's attention and helped portray the message very clearly. Another thing we liked was the facebook title and how the clips cut short and emphasized that facebook was a main source of cyberbullying. Some suggestions we have are to try to keep the video smooth. For example, after a clip it would transition to a title and it seemed empty with no audio inbetween the clip, the title, and the next clip. One title seemed very confusing and seemed to have improper grammar. Nothing too major. Overall the video was great. -John and Eduardo B.
Taylor L and Skyler
ReplyDeleteGood job you Guys!
We liked the music that you used throughout your video, it was techno-y and fit the situation at hand. One thing that you might consider fixing was raising the volume of the interviews and check all of your clips to see if any were cut off too early. We liked how you addressed facebook and had a lot of people talking about facebook, it was a very unique and interesting way to edit the video. We think that you guys did a great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What we liked best about your video was the clip of students walking by in the quad with the sounds of the students as well as music. Another thing we liked was the facebook clips and how it went to diffrent students then to a teacher who backed it up. Something that through us off a little bit was the abrupt Cuts of clips to add a slid in We think you could cut those out and make the video flow better.Good Job.
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Ashley Perez
What I liked best about your video was the effective use of titles to reinforce the point that was being made. Another thing I really liked was the quick cuts when kids said facebook. I feel that that really helped drive the point home that a lot of people feel the same way about facebook being a main source of cyberbullying. What I think could be improved is that the interview with Mr.C seemed like it was zoomed out too far. I dont know if that can be fixed or not but that was the only problem I had with the video, overall a very well done video. -Brad
ReplyDeleteWhat we liked about your video was that you added titles during the video to not make it seem boring.We also liked how you put together the clips when they all said that cyberbulling happens on facebook.We think that you should add a title or start blank at the beggining because it started the interview too fast.The music was good but you could've added sound during the titles.You also need more information on cyberbulling because you didin't mention where you can get help and from who.
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Dear Ivy's group,
ReplyDeleteWhat we liked best about your video was the fast start. We thought that this was effective because it immediatly brings your attention in to the clip. One thing you can do to make the clip better was to go over and edit the out points because a few times they got cut to narrow and the voice got cut off. Overall it was a good video but the editing needs some work.
What we liked best about your video was the music and organization of it, how it flowed throughtout the video other then the middle of it, the part where three girls were saying something the clips went by a little too fast it cut off what she was saying. I also really liked when jacob asked where does cyberbullying happen most. And it showed clips of people saying "facebook". This was effective because it drew the audiences attention, it really makes you think about facebook and the things you say on it you should be aware of.
ReplyDeleteby michelle Hernandez Blanca Ceja
What we enjoyed most about your video was the way to drew out the message that cyberbullying happens a lot on facebook. The introduction was also interesting because it didnt start out with a title. The titles in between the clips were also very well related to the topic that was talked about. Also i enjoyed the panoramic scene of the lunch tables. The music was pumped up in the right areas, escpecially in the credits the music was sad, its what i left my seat thinking about because its a serious issue. I suggest for the introduction to have a black screen with some music before having the opinion of the girl so the viewers have time to pay attention. -Zoie & Kenzie
ReplyDeleteWhat we liked best about your video was that it was sort of cyber feeling. We thought it was effective because it attracts more of a younger crowd. The main points in this video were very clear yet seemed a tad repeatative. The sound could have been improved in between clips. The transitions were a bit too fast and we couldn't really tell what was going on. At least it didn't bore us. The credits were quite humorous. We really liked it a lot. I, Marleen, am sorry for talking through it.
ReplyDelete<3 Dillon & Marleen
What we liked best about the video was the cuts of the Facebook clips. we liked that it jumped from so many people and it really emphasized the point that a lot of this happens on facebook. The opening scene was fine, we would just say that it jumped in pretty fast, and we kind of missed it. We felt you got your message across really well, especially by using the titles to really show what you were trying to say. Maybe adjusting the audio a bit would help the video, we noticed it went silent in some places. For the end, we agreed that it all went by really fast, and we missed what the girls were saying. We liked the credits, it gave a humorous effect to it, and it make the credits interesting. Overall it was a really good video. Good Job
ReplyDelete-Ashley T. and Juan A.
What we liked about your video was when all the people continuously were saying how facebook was the main source for cyberbullying. We also liiked how the titles were cyber oriented.You guys should have put more music during transitions because it got a little boring and plain. The backround during your interviews was rather noisy. Maybe next time you can try and quiet the people in the backround or go to a secluded area. What we got out of this video is that facebook is where all the problems start for cyberbullying and people should be more careful about who they let view their site.
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Taylor Powell and Sabrena Soto
What we liked about the video was the way you got the point across. We really liked how there would be a question, and then the interviews that answered that question. It was very effective. We also liked the statement about Facebook, and then all the quick cuts to people mentioning Facebook. The quick cuts to multiple people saying "Facebook" helped emphasize the dangers of Facebook. One suggestion would be to go back and make sure the cuts were clean. We noticed some people got cut off when they were talking.
ReplyDeleteThe person talking at the beginning somewhat got lost because we think it was too quick for an opening.
-Isaiah and Kaycee
What we liked about your video was the editing of the clips. The people that were interviewed the are variatized and the responses they gave were very good like the one word responses. The audio was good because it set the mood and fit the people about their topic. WE especially liked the part where it shows clips cut to the people with the use of titles. What needs to be worked upon was the cutting of clips because they were too fast instead of having a smoother flow and the titles need to last longer because they kind of appeared out of nowhere and hard to read.
ReplyDeleteCesar and Eduardo E
What we liked best about your video was the titles and how it introduced the interviewers's answer. It was effective because it caught the audience's attention and helped portray the message very clearly. Another thing we liked was the facebook title and how the clips cut short and emphasized that facebook was a main source of cyberbullying. Some suggestions we have are to try to keep the video smooth. For example, after a clip it would transition to a title and it seemed empty with no audio inbetween the clip, the title, and the next clip. One title seemed very confusing and seemed to have improper grammar. Nothing too major. Overall the video was great.
ReplyDelete-John and Eduardo B.