What we liked about the video was that the video had a serious tone but also added comic relief throughout the video. The openeing scenes were very well editied and placed in the video. The theme and message was the best part of this video. The catch phrase "Dont do it" was used at appropriate times and was said by teachers, students, and even citizens of Hollister. The music was good and the conclusion scene was a funny way of ending the video. Good Job guys
What we like best about this video was the variety of interviews. We thought this was effective because it showed how many people actually cared about cyberbulling.The opening scene was well done because of the differnt pictures that were shown. We also like the music at the beginning he video. The main point they made about cyberbulling was not to do it. The interviews went over well because you guys had different camera angles for some of the interviews. We liked your design for the opening tilte. All in all, it was a well structed video. Good job!!!
What we liked about your video was that it did have a commical relief aspect to it. Such as the little comments and how things were said. We though this was effective because it kept our attention. But we do feel as though it may have been TOO funny. Maybe pulling some of the commical relief such as someone falling out of the tree would be better.
The opening slide was really good and creative. It caught our attention very well. It was a good hook because we knew what the video was generally about.
Don't do it, was the main point we got from the video. You did this by having multiple people saying it throughout the video. For when there were interviews our focus were on the people.
The interview's volume was way too low for most of the interviews. Go back and re-edit those.
We can't really remember the closing credits, they seemed really short and went by really fast.
What we liked about your video was that it did have a commical relief aspect to it. Such as the little comments and how things were said. We though this was effective because it kept our attention. But we do feel as though it may have been TOO funny. Maybe pulling some of the commical relief such as someone falling out of the tree would be better.
The opening slide was really good and creative. It caught our attention very well. It was a good hook because we knew what the video was generally about.
Don't do it, was the main point we got from the video. You did this by having multiple people saying it throughout the video. For when there were interviews our focus were on the people.
The interview's volume was way too low for most of the interviews. Go back and re-edit those.
We can't really remember the closing credits, they seemed really short and went by really fast.
I really like the begining because it had a really good beat to it and many different pictures, and it really caught my atention to begin with. the main points on cyberbullieng was that it was a very dangerouse thing to do because people get hurt and at times even come to comit suicide because of bullying, as for sexting the main points again was that it was dangerouse because people send pictures to people theve met online on a social network never really know who it could be if its an older person thats trieng to take advantage of youn girls. my favorite part was the catch phrase that was used and the comic relief created because of the young teens in the video.
What we liked most about your video was that it provided comic relief. We thought this was effective because it caught our attention and made it less boring. The opening scene was interesting but confusing. You could make the hook louder because we couldn't hear it. The main point was don't do it. Your video was in a logical order. Your interview footage was diverse and made it more interesting for us. We suggest that you add more music, you had music in the beginning but it would have been nice to have more throughout your video. You showed your final thought very well and throughout the whole video. Your opening title grabbed our attention and it provided an idea of the content of the video. You should title everyone you interview to keep it consistent. Good job on your credits and titles. Love: Alicia and Sam
What we liked best about your video was how it was humorous but also had a serious message to portray. We thought this was effective because it caught the viewer's attention and kept them interested. The opening scene was very colorful with the title, and immediately grabbed the viewer with the music and the first few clips that were shown. The main points that were being made were how dangerous cyberbullying and sexting are, as well as to not do it. When people were being interviewed, we saw the person who was talking. It helped to show their facial expressions and really show how people feel about the dangers of cyberbullying. The music playing throughout the video was upbeat and could keep someone interested in what was going on throughout the video. We thought the end was entertaining and could keep younger viewers interested because of this. We feel all the titles in the video as well as the bibliography were done well. All in all it was a good video.
Lizzy and Denise What we liked best about the video was that the messege was clear and straight to the point. We thought this was effective because it made it easy to understand. The opening scene couldve been more introductive it kind of went too fast. Main points made were not to do it because there are consequences. Ideas that needed to be emphasized are who to go to for help and how dangerous it can really be. The sequence couldve been more organized for example having an intro at the beginning. Sound couldve been more variated but we liked the upbeat music while Damen was talking. The final thought was good because it sticks in your head to not do it but it couldve been better if there was an emotional affect. Credits seemed to be really short and dull. And there was also some points where the camera was moving way too much. Overall we liked the video and we think teens would be affected because of the comic relief.
What we liked best about your video was the comic relief it brought to people. We thought this was effected because it made us see the reality of sexting and cyberbullying. Yes the opening scene strongly hook the viewer. They could possibly add more pictures because they only had interviews. The made points made were to not do cyberbullying nor sexting. The points are logically ordered. The audience is looking at the person who is being interviewed. The music gets loud when something interesting is going to happen. Yes the thought of the summation is the most important message. There is an opening title, and it grabs the attention of the viewers. we really like this video overall. - Alyssa & Estefania
What we liked best about the video was its balance between seriousness and humor. We thought it was effective because it catches the attention of the targeted audience(teenagers). We liked the opening scene because it showed the cell phones and social media sites where cyberbullying is most abundant. I think the main points of the video are very well emphasized; it tells the audience how serious the issues are and it tells them to not do them. We would have liked it better if it had more information on what to do in case of being victims of those situations. I think the narrations were very well done and the choices of the people interviewed. Also, try to minimize the excessive ambient noise on some of the interviews. We think that the titles and the credits were well done. Good job! -Luis & Vanessa
What we liked best about your video was the comic relief! It really caught our attention and did not lose our interest. We thought this was effictive because it can really out to the teens because it serious and funny and a lot of information that we can comprehend. The opening scene was very good because it showed all the websites that teens go on and it grads your attention right away because it makes you think that it will be interesting. The main point that we came across was "DON'T DO IT"! It was in a good logical order because it slip up sexting and cyberbullying and did not mix them up. The narroration part where damon is talking was good because there was movement and the camera angels were great! The sound level was very efficient throughout the video and picked up at the right times. We suggest that you put some more sound effect such as times when you say your "catch phrase". Our final thought was that the message was clear and we undersood what it meant. For the credits, we suggest that you add all of the members names that were included in your video. This was a successful video and we were very entertained the whole time! -Julissa & Michelle
What we like best aboutyour video was the comic relief you guys added in to it and made it serious yet intertaining. For example when you filmed the guy in the tree. His statement was true and funny. We thought this was effective because the audience your targeting are teens and young adults and by adding the comedy side to it, it reaches out to them more and grabs their attention.The opening scene grabs the attention of the audience very well becuase it has alot of color to it and alot of pictures to see, like the ones that keep popping up. We think the hook was really good becuase it got us interested to keep on paying attention. The main point that was clearly being made was don't do it. It was a catchy and clever phrase that is left in your mind to remember. We think you should also include where to go to get help, how to deal with it bfore it gets out of hand, and who to talk to. We also really liked how you guys also covered cyberbullying and sexting in the same video. It's kind of like a two in one. One suggestion fornext time is to keep the camera steady when filming other people because it kind of gives people a head ache keep moving all over the place. We liked how they controlled the volume of the music in certain parts of the video. One other suggestion is to get close to the people that are talking becuase in some we can't really hear the person, for example when the man with the dog is speaking. You guys did a really good job concluding the video with the final phrase "don't do it!".
what we liked best about the video was how funny it was. we tought this was affective because it catches the viewers attention. the opening scene was very creative. the main point was dont do it!!! sound might need some adjustment due to the fact that it was a little hard to hear. The audience has a veriaty of things to look at. The summation could of had a little more info. Credits were neatly done but could of been a little better. good and funny video overall. Elissa Abonce & Jorge Chavez
What we really liked best about your video was the variety of people interviewed, and the many different scences. We thought this was really effective because it represented the realness of cyberbullying and showed how it really effects all different types of people. We really liked the opening scene. It really grabbed our attention, and we loved your "Don't Do It" catchphrase.
The main points about your video were why you should be careful with technology, and why you should watch out for cyberbullying and sexting. We would say the facts should be more emphasized about cyberbullying. Perhaps you could emphasize the seriousness and physcological effects of cyberbullying and sexting. The music was of good taste, and stayed pretty steady throughout the video. You could choose a different song for the ending credits. We think that maybe the message could be a little more ephasized in your video. We think you could add a little more seriousness to add to the importance of watching out for cyberbullying. But we did love your comedy parts of your video. It added a little fun to the video, and definately grabs teen's attention. We really liked your title. It was really creative with all the different colors and pictures. Your bibliography was correct too. All in all, great job! We really liked your video and can tell you worked hard on it :) ~Jessica and Alexis
What we really liked best about your video was the variety of people interviewed, and the many different scences. We thought this was really effective because it represented the realness of cyberbullying and showed how it really effects all different types of people. We really liked the opening scene. It really grabbed our attention, and we loved your "Don't Do It" catchphrase.
The main points about your video were why you should be careful with technology, and why you should watch out for cyberbullying and sexting. We would say the facts should be more emphasized about cyberbullying. Perhaps you could emphasize the seriousness and physcological effects of cyberbullying and sexting. The music was of good taste, and stayed pretty steady throughout the video. You could choose a different song for the ending credits. We think that maybe the message could be a little more ephasized in your video. We think you could add a little more seriousness to add to the importance of watching out for cyberbullying. But we did love your comedy parts of your video. It added a little fun to the video, and definately grabs teen's attention. We really liked your title. It was really creative with all the different colors and pictures. Your bibliography was correct too. All in all, great job! We really liked your video and can tell you worked hard on it :) ~Jessica and Alexis
I really liked how the video had some flow and it had some humorous moments to it. I liked how the seriousness of the video was able to being seen even through the comical moments found through out the video. However i think there was a point to where it was a little too much humor to it and it kinda took away from the seriousness of the video. I liked the opening title and how it caught our attention. Honestly i really don't think there was much wrong with the title because i felt that it served its purpose.I got that the message of the video was basically to not do cyberbullying but i think it could have a little more added to it.However, I liked how we were focused on the interviews, but i thought that the volume was really low on some of the interviews. I liked the credits except for the fact that they were a little too fast.
Demi & Cody
ReplyDeleteWhat we liked about the video was that the video had a serious tone but also added comic relief throughout the video. The openeing scenes were very well editied and placed in the video. The theme and message was the best part of this video. The catch phrase "Dont do it" was used at appropriate times and was said by teachers, students, and even citizens of Hollister. The music was good and the conclusion scene was a funny way of ending the video. Good Job guys
What we like best about this video was the variety of interviews. We thought this was effective because it showed how many people actually cared about cyberbulling.The opening scene was well done because of the differnt pictures that were shown. We also like the music at the beginning he video. The main point they made about cyberbulling was not to do it. The interviews went over well because you guys had different camera angles for some of the interviews. We liked your design for the opening tilte. All in all, it was a well structed video. Good job!!!
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What we liked about your video was that it did have a commical relief aspect to it. Such as the little comments and how things were said. We though this was effective because it kept our attention. But we do feel as though it may have been TOO funny. Maybe pulling some of the commical relief such as someone falling out of the tree would be better.
ReplyDeleteThe opening slide was really good and creative. It caught our attention very well. It was a good hook because we knew what the video was generally about.
Don't do it, was the main point we got from the video. You did this by having multiple people saying it throughout the video.
For when there were interviews our focus were on the people.
The interview's volume was way too low for most of the interviews. Go back and re-edit those.
We can't really remember the closing credits, they seemed really short and went by really fast.
What we liked about your video was that it did have a commical relief aspect to it. Such as the little comments and how things were said. We though this was effective because it kept our attention. But we do feel as though it may have been TOO funny. Maybe pulling some of the commical relief such as someone falling out of the tree would be better.
ReplyDeleteThe opening slide was really good and creative. It caught our attention very well. It was a good hook because we knew what the video was generally about.
Don't do it, was the main point we got from the video. You did this by having multiple people saying it throughout the video.
For when there were interviews our focus were on the people.
The interview's volume was way too low for most of the interviews. Go back and re-edit those.
We can't really remember the closing credits, they seemed really short and went by really fast.
I really like the begining because it had a really good beat to it and many different pictures, and it really caught my atention to begin with. the main points on cyberbullieng was that it was a very dangerouse thing to do because people get hurt and at times even come to comit suicide because of bullying, as for sexting the main points again was that it was dangerouse because people send pictures to people theve met online on a social network never really know who it could be if its an older person thats trieng to take advantage of youn girls. my favorite part was the catch phrase that was used and the comic relief created because of the young teens in the video.
ReplyDeleteWhat we liked most about your video was that it provided comic relief. We thought this was effective because it caught our attention and made it less boring. The opening scene was interesting but confusing. You could make the hook louder because we couldn't hear it. The main point was don't do it. Your video was in a logical order. Your interview footage was diverse and made it more interesting for us. We suggest that you add more music, you had music in the beginning but it would have been nice to have more throughout your video. You showed your final thought very well and throughout the whole video. Your opening title grabbed our attention and it provided an idea of the content of the video. You should title everyone you interview to keep it consistent. Good job on your credits and titles.
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What we liked best about your video was how it was humorous but also had a serious message to portray. We thought this was effective because it caught the viewer's attention and kept them interested. The opening scene was very colorful with the title, and immediately grabbed the viewer with the music and the first few clips that were shown.
ReplyDeleteThe main points that were being made were how dangerous cyberbullying and sexting are, as well as to not do it. When people were being interviewed, we saw the person who was talking. It helped to show their facial expressions and really show how people feel about the dangers of cyberbullying.
The music playing throughout the video was upbeat and could keep someone interested in what was going on throughout the video.
We thought the end was entertaining and could keep younger viewers interested because of this.
We feel all the titles in the video as well as the bibliography were done well.
All in all it was a good video.
- Jaay & Cristian
Lizzy and Denise
ReplyDeleteWhat we liked best about the video was that the messege was clear and straight to the point. We thought this was effective because it made it easy to understand. The opening scene couldve been more introductive it kind of went too fast. Main points made were not to do it because there are consequences. Ideas that needed to be emphasized are who to go to for help and how dangerous it can really be. The sequence couldve been more organized for example having an intro at the beginning. Sound couldve been more variated but we liked the upbeat music while Damen was talking. The final thought was good because it sticks in your head to not do it but it couldve been better if there was an emotional affect. Credits seemed to be really short and dull. And there was also some points where the camera was moving way too much. Overall we liked the video and we think teens would be affected because of the comic relief.
What we liked best about your video was the comic relief it brought to people. We thought this was effected because it made us see the reality of sexting and cyberbullying. Yes the opening scene strongly hook the viewer. They could possibly add more pictures because they only had interviews. The made points made were to not do cyberbullying nor sexting. The points are logically ordered. The audience is looking at the person who is being interviewed. The music gets loud when something interesting is going to happen. Yes the thought of the summation is the most important message. There is an opening title, and it grabs the attention of the viewers. we really like this video overall.
ReplyDelete- Alyssa & Estefania
What we liked best about the video was its balance between seriousness and humor. We thought it was effective because it catches the attention of the targeted audience(teenagers). We liked the opening scene because it showed the cell phones and social media sites where cyberbullying is most abundant. I think the main points of the video are very well emphasized; it tells the audience how serious the issues are and it tells them to not do them. We would have liked it better if it had more information on what to do in case of being victims of those situations. I think the narrations were very well done and the choices of the people interviewed. Also, try to minimize the excessive ambient noise on some of the interviews. We think that the titles and the credits were well done. Good job!
ReplyDelete-Luis & Vanessa
What we liked best about your video was the comic relief! It really caught our attention and did not lose our interest. We thought this was effictive because it can really out to the teens because it serious and funny and a lot of information that we can comprehend. The opening scene was very good because it showed all the websites that teens go on and it grads your attention right away because it makes you think that it will be interesting. The main point that we came across was "DON'T DO IT"! It was in a good logical order because it slip up sexting and cyberbullying and did not mix them up. The narroration part where damon is talking was good because there was movement and the camera angels were great! The sound level was very efficient throughout the video and picked up at the right times. We suggest that you put some more sound effect such as times when you say your "catch phrase". Our final thought was that the message was clear and we undersood what it meant. For the credits, we suggest that you add all of the members names that were included in your video. This was a successful video and we were very entertained the whole time!
ReplyDelete-Julissa & Michelle
What we like best aboutyour video was the comic relief you guys added in to it and made it serious yet intertaining. For example when you filmed the guy in the tree. His statement was true and funny. We thought this was effective because the audience your targeting are teens and young adults and by adding the comedy side to it, it reaches out to them more and grabs their attention.The opening scene grabs the attention of the audience very well becuase it has alot of color to it and alot of pictures to see, like the ones that keep popping up. We think the hook was really good becuase it got us interested to keep on paying attention. The main point that was clearly being made was don't do it. It was a catchy and clever phrase that is left in your mind to remember. We think you should also include where to go to get help, how to deal with it bfore it gets out of hand, and who to talk to. We also really liked how you guys also covered cyberbullying and sexting in the same video. It's kind of like a two in one. One suggestion fornext time is to keep the camera steady when filming other people because it kind of gives people a head ache keep moving all over the place. We liked how they controlled the volume of the music in certain parts of the video. One other suggestion is to get close to the people that are talking becuase in some we can't really hear the person, for example when the man with the dog is speaking. You guys did a really good job concluding the video with the final phrase "don't do it!".
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Kelsey R. & Cynthia N.
what we liked best about the video was how funny it was. we tought this was affective because it catches the viewers attention. the opening scene was very creative. the main point was dont do it!!! sound might need some adjustment due to the fact that it was a little hard to hear. The audience has a veriaty of things to look at. The summation could of had a little more info. Credits were neatly done but could of been a little better. good and funny video overall.
ReplyDeleteElissa Abonce & Jorge Chavez
What we really liked best about your video was the variety of people interviewed, and the many different scences.
ReplyDeleteWe thought this was really effective because it represented the realness of cyberbullying and showed how it really effects all different types of people.
We really liked the opening scene. It really grabbed our attention, and we loved your "Don't Do It" catchphrase.
The main points about your video were why you should be careful with technology, and why you should watch out for cyberbullying and sexting.
We would say the facts should be more emphasized about cyberbullying. Perhaps you could emphasize the seriousness and physcological effects of cyberbullying and sexting.
The music was of good taste, and stayed pretty steady throughout the video. You could choose a different song for the ending credits.
We think that maybe the message could be a little more ephasized in your video. We think you could add a little more seriousness to add to the importance of watching out for cyberbullying. But we did love your comedy parts of your video. It added a little fun to the video, and definately grabs teen's attention.
We really liked your title. It was really creative with all the different colors and pictures. Your bibliography was correct too. All in all, great job! We really liked your video and can tell you worked hard on it :)
~Jessica and Alexis
What we really liked best about your video was the variety of people interviewed, and the many different scences.
ReplyDeleteWe thought this was really effective because it represented the realness of cyberbullying and showed how it really effects all different types of people.
We really liked the opening scene. It really grabbed our attention, and we loved your "Don't Do It" catchphrase.
The main points about your video were why you should be careful with technology, and why you should watch out for cyberbullying and sexting.
We would say the facts should be more emphasized about cyberbullying. Perhaps you could emphasize the seriousness and physcological effects of cyberbullying and sexting.
The music was of good taste, and stayed pretty steady throughout the video. You could choose a different song for the ending credits.
We think that maybe the message could be a little more ephasized in your video. We think you could add a little more seriousness to add to the importance of watching out for cyberbullying. But we did love your comedy parts of your video. It added a little fun to the video, and definately grabs teen's attention.
We really liked your title. It was really creative with all the different colors and pictures. Your bibliography was correct too. All in all, great job! We really liked your video and can tell you worked hard on it :)
~Jessica and Alexis
I really liked how the video had some flow and it had some humorous moments to it. I liked how the seriousness of the video was able to being seen even through the comical moments found through out the video. However i think there was a point to where it was a little too much humor to it and it kinda took away from the seriousness of the video. I liked the opening title and how it caught our attention. Honestly i really don't think there was much wrong with the title because i felt that it served its purpose.I got that the message of the video was basically to not do cyberbullying but i think it could have a little more added to it.However, I liked how we were focused on the interviews, but i thought that the volume was really low on some of the interviews. I liked the credits except for the fact that they were a little too fast.
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