What we liked best about your video was the music and organization of the transition of clips we thought it made good points about cyberbullying and especiallt thought that Mr.C points were effective and connected to real situations in life. The editing of the clips were really effective beause it made your video flow and smooth especially in the end. Although though the editing was really good, the editings of the questions was a little to fast and we were not able to read all of it. By Michelle Hernandez And Blanca Ceja
what we liked best about the video was how unique it was. we tought this was affective because it catches the viewers attention. the opening scene was very creative. the main point was do not cyberbully. sound might need some adjustment due to the fact that it was a little hard to hear. The audience has a veriaty of things to look at. The summation could of had a little more info.there wer no credits because your guys wernt finished yet but overall good video Elissa Abonce & Jorge Chavez
Alyssa What i liked about your video is your music it fit the video but it was loud when Mr. robago was talking. there were good points in the video like when Krystalbel walked out of the bathroom that was a good. it made sense. you guys had good interviews as well. the most important about it what you can do if your being bullied and who you can go to if it ever happened. titles were good but o believe you didnt have any credits. after you add eveything you guys said wasnt done or missing i think it will be really good and catch our attention even more :)
What i liked best about your video is the opening scene. It was a really nice hook that cought the audiance's attention. The audio needs to be louder in some of the interviews. Yhe messege was very clear and to the point. It was a very unique video you guys created. One last thing is that you guys could add a little more info especially on how to prevent it, but overall it was good. -Lizzy<3
What I like best about your video was the musci choice for the entire vedio. I thought this was effective becuase it was a good tone throughout the whole video. The opening of your guys' video was well organized. The main point they made about cyberbulling was that yuo shouldn't do it becuase it good really hurt people physically and emotionally. I thought the interviews were well done as well. The sound like I said at the beginning and throughout the whole video was well done. The opening title and credits were well done also. All in all, great job!!!
What I liked best about your video, was the inspiration you showed in it. This was really effective because you filmed Crystabel telling the viewers to "Never let anyone define you", and the way she said it looked like she really meant what she was saying. The opening scene really grabs the viewer. I think it was the music that really grabbed my attention at the beginning. You also had a lot of different scenes, which made it more interesting. The main points being made were why people should not cyberbully and why people should not sext. I think your ideas were emphasized well, and were in logical order. When you were interviewing people, the viewer was watching the person speaking. But it wasn't for a too long of time, so the viewers didn't get bored. The final thought, was when Crystabel was giving a small inspirational speech. It was definately a great ending to your video. The credits were great, but maybe just and the bibliography was great. I would just recommend slowing down some of the slides with questions on it. It was just a little bit too fast to read. Great job:) I loved your video! ~Jessica
The opening scene really grabs the viewer's attention and allows us to engage in your video. I think it was the music that really grabbed my attention at the beginning. The diversity of scenes you guy incorporated in the movie really mad the video that much more creative. The main point that really stuck out to me was not to sext and i really think that was the best one you guys emphasized. I also thought that there was a good order in the clips except for one or two in where i didnt feel it was the best possible order but it wasnt that bad. However, I really liked the way you ended the video with the little inspirational talk. I thought it was very appropriate for the ending of the video and i thought that it was the best way to end your video. The only thing i would reccomend is to slow down some of the slides on the video because it was too fast to read them sometimes but the credits were pretty good. Eddy Navarro
What I liked about your video was that it had the feel of a documentary, but it wasn't boring. As a teenager, I can say that this was easy to relate to. I thought the choice to have Cody walking down the ramp and saying the information was a good one. It reminded me somewhat of a news cast. The music was also really interesting, as well. -Kayla
maria i really like your video because the music and the clips whent good together. i espesially like the song you guys put for mr. robaggo.I liked how you guys showed how fast sexting goes around a school buy acting it out. i liked how cody said a lot of information while coming down of the ramp.i thought the point was very clear.i know you guys didnt really finished it but it was really good considering your computers didnt worked for a while so good work guys.
What I liked best about your video was the teenage perspective, in the first scene you showed how sexting spreads and actually happens. A suggestion I can give is maybe editing Cody's walking on the rampway. It is a choppy transition that needs to be fixed, maybe you can add a fact or title between. What I also enjoyed was mr. Rabago's interview, but it is kind of difficult to hear him. Also, his interview is a bit too long, so maybe you should clip it into two separate pieces. In addition, the music overpowers Mr. Rabago's voice, and the song choice does not add to your purpose. I would suggest a slow, calm, piano instrumental for this. Overall, your video is lovely, but those are the things I would consider.
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ReplyDeleteWhat we liked best about your video was the music and organization of the transition of clips we thought it made good points about cyberbullying and especiallt thought that Mr.C points were effective and connected to real situations in life. The editing of the clips were really effective beause it made your video flow and smooth especially in the end. Although though the editing was really good, the editings of the questions was a little to fast and we were not able to read all of it.
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what we liked best about the video was how unique it was. we tought this was affective because it catches the viewers attention. the opening scene was very creative. the main point was do not cyberbully. sound might need some adjustment due to the fact that it was a little hard to hear. The audience has a veriaty of things to look at. The summation could of had a little more info.there wer no credits because your guys wernt finished yet but overall good video
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Alyssa
ReplyDeleteWhat i liked about your video is your music it fit the video but it was loud when Mr. robago was talking. there were good points in the video like when Krystalbel walked out of the bathroom that was a good. it made sense. you guys had good interviews as well. the most important about it what you can do if your being bullied and who you can go to if it ever happened. titles were good but o believe you didnt have any credits. after you add eveything you guys said wasnt done or missing i think it will be really good and catch our attention even more :)
What i liked best about your video is the opening scene. It was a really nice hook that cought the audiance's attention. The audio needs to be louder in some of the interviews. Yhe messege was very clear and to the point. It was a very unique video you guys created. One last thing is that you guys could add a little more info especially on how to prevent it, but overall it was good.
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What I like best about your video was the musci choice for the entire vedio. I thought this was effective becuase it was a good tone throughout the whole video. The opening of your guys' video was well organized. The main point they made about cyberbulling was that yuo shouldn't do it becuase it good really hurt people physically and emotionally. I thought the interviews were well done as well. The sound like I said at the beginning and throughout the whole video was well done. The opening title and credits were well done also. All in all, great job!!!
ReplyDeleteWhat I liked best about your video, was the inspiration you showed in it. This was really effective because you filmed Crystabel telling the viewers to "Never let anyone define you", and the way she said it looked like she really meant what she was saying.
ReplyDeleteThe opening scene really grabs the viewer. I think it was the music that really grabbed my attention at the beginning.
You also had a lot of different scenes, which made it more interesting.
The main points being made were why people should not cyberbully and why people should not sext. I think your ideas were emphasized well, and were in logical order.
When you were interviewing people, the viewer was watching the person speaking. But it wasn't for a too long of time, so the viewers didn't get bored.
The final thought, was when Crystabel was giving a small inspirational speech. It was definately a great ending to your video.
The credits were great, but maybe just and the bibliography was great. I would just recommend slowing down some of the slides with questions on it. It was just a little bit too fast to read.
Great job:) I loved your video!
~Jessica
The opening scene really grabs the viewer's attention and allows us to engage in your video. I think it was the music that really grabbed my attention at the beginning. The diversity of scenes you guy incorporated in the movie really mad the video that much more creative. The main point that really stuck out to me was not to sext and i really think that was the best one you guys emphasized. I also thought that there was a good order in the clips except for one or two in where i didnt feel it was the best possible order but it wasnt that bad. However, I really liked the way you ended the video with the little inspirational talk. I thought it was very appropriate for the ending of the video and i thought that it was the best way to end your video. The only thing i would reccomend is to slow down some of the slides on the video because it was too fast to read them sometimes but the credits were pretty good.
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What I liked about your video was that it had the feel of a documentary, but it wasn't boring. As a teenager, I can say that this was easy to relate to. I thought the choice to have Cody walking down the ramp and saying the information was a good one. It reminded me somewhat of a news cast. The music was also really interesting, as well.
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maria
ReplyDeletei really like your video because the music and the clips whent good together. i espesially like the song you guys put for mr. robaggo.I liked how you guys showed how fast sexting goes around a school buy acting it out. i liked how cody said a lot of information while coming down of the ramp.i thought the point was very clear.i know you guys didnt really finished it but it was really good considering your computers didnt worked for a while so good work guys.
What I liked best about your video was the teenage perspective, in the first scene you showed how sexting spreads and actually happens. A suggestion I can give is maybe editing Cody's walking on the rampway. It is a choppy transition that needs to be fixed, maybe you can add a fact or title between. What I also enjoyed was mr. Rabago's interview, but it is kind of difficult to hear him. Also, his interview is a bit too long, so maybe you should clip it into two separate pieces. In addition, the music overpowers Mr. Rabago's voice, and the song choice does not add to your purpose. I would suggest a slow, calm, piano instrumental for this. Overall, your video is lovely, but those are the things I would consider.
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